for Natsu of the Darkness7/6/2024 c40 Vincent balmes
Then what's natsu's abyss dragon slayer secret art going to be man
Then what's natsu's abyss dragon slayer secret art going to be man
6/30/2024 c5 Guest
Why does levy included in the harem? I think its okay for her if she's with gajeel.
Why does levy included in the harem? I think its okay for her if she's with gajeel.
2/28/2024 c2 
1Markan999
I will be honest, the story is good and interesting but the grammar really sucks.
1Markan999I will be honest, the story is good and interesting but the grammar really sucks.
12/6/2023 c68 Great Dark Knight
As for harem, maybe Juvia and Levy aren't needed because they have more chemistry with Gray and Gajeel.
Jenny,Hisui and Minerva kinda underrated so maybe you should add them
As for harem, maybe Juvia and Levy aren't needed because they have more chemistry with Gray and Gajeel.
Jenny,Hisui and Minerva kinda underrated so maybe you should add them
12/4/2023 c68 15EternalMultiverse
As long as Sayla’s still a member of the harem, it’s all right with me.
15EternalMultiverseAs long as Sayla’s still a member of the harem, it’s all right with me.
11/13/2023 c67 pixelgames805
Am I the only one wondering why Natsu's dragonification hasn't started knowing that his dragon died and he couldn't do the dragon soul ritual to seal himself inside Natsu to create the antibodies?
Am I the only one wondering why Natsu's dragonification hasn't started knowing that his dragon died and he couldn't do the dragon soul ritual to seal himself inside Natsu to create the antibodies?
8/1/2023 c15 XxKonekoLoverxX
so does natsu not have his dragon inside him making antibodies to prevent him from going full dragon? if so does his dragon look like red eyes black dragon from yugioh?
so does natsu not have his dragon inside him making antibodies to prevent him from going full dragon? if so does his dragon look like red eyes black dragon from yugioh?
7/19/2023 c67 altajir95
Awesome chapter.
Looking forward for the next chapter. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Awesome chapter.
Looking forward for the next chapter. Stay safe and stay healthy.
7/5/2023 c66 Guest
Good chapter
Good chapter
7/6/2023 c66 altajir95
Awesome chapter.
Looking forward for the next chapter. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Awesome chapter.
Looking forward for the next chapter. Stay safe and stay healthy.
2/26/2023 c4 DogmaticNonsense
now erza trying to say don't attack laxus right after she was about to attack? after stopping Mira a first time just to make the point she was going to be the one to go attack him first.
what do you want your characters to be doing exactly? this confuses the situation pointlessly by breaking your own continuity.
now erza trying to say don't attack laxus right after she was about to attack? after stopping Mira a first time just to make the point she was going to be the one to go attack him first.
what do you want your characters to be doing exactly? this confuses the situation pointlessly by breaking your own continuity.
2/26/2023 c4 DogmaticNonsense
this makes no sense for natsu to do whatsoever.
this entire chapter breaks character, both based off the og story and what you've written so far.
not to mention how out of Character the earlier sudden bout of self loathing and self pity in front of the group was
this makes no sense for natsu to do whatsoever.
this entire chapter breaks character, both based off the og story and what you've written so far.
not to mention how out of Character the earlier sudden bout of self loathing and self pity in front of the group was