for The Adventures Of The Reincarnated Otaku (On Hold)9/22/2019 c7 jfj
wow rightly you left the story while the idea was something good the rest you did quite repetitive and choices something idiotic that seems humor but does not give any hint of grace. The idea of putting something into a familiar dxd of devil was good, not an oc yes since they have a habit of making them want to be the "hero" but they complicate it and it goes wrong or something else if an oc with an inheritance type is not descendant of hero and of some supernatural being like fallen angel devil demigod yokai etc, or only descendant of hero with a sacred gear is something common but it makes it have unique ideas and desallore a powerful sub species like the sacred sacred gear common of the shadows of the hero faction do it with some powerful spirit locked up and it was not until the oc that I woke him up and constantly evolves it until it is longinus.
wow rightly you left the story while the idea was something good the rest you did quite repetitive and choices something idiotic that seems humor but does not give any hint of grace. The idea of putting something into a familiar dxd of devil was good, not an oc yes since they have a habit of making them want to be the "hero" but they complicate it and it goes wrong or something else if an oc with an inheritance type is not descendant of hero and of some supernatural being like fallen angel devil demigod yokai etc, or only descendant of hero with a sacred gear is something common but it makes it have unique ideas and desallore a powerful sub species like the sacred sacred gear common of the shadows of the hero faction do it with some powerful spirit locked up and it was not until the oc that I woke him up and constantly evolves it until it is longinus.
7/23/2019 c2 Guest
Well I never like characters that seem incompetent, which is pretty much every male mc in ecchi anime... Honestly you nailed the stereotype which is good for readers who are into that sort of thing.
As such whilst I think your a pretty good writer I can honestly say this story ain't for me so I wish you all the best and fun writing it.
Well I never like characters that seem incompetent, which is pretty much every male mc in ecchi anime... Honestly you nailed the stereotype which is good for readers who are into that sort of thing.
As such whilst I think your a pretty good writer I can honestly say this story ain't for me so I wish you all the best and fun writing it.
7/21/2019 c1 darkstel
Saito and H. Issei? Two disgusting characters in one story. You have "wonderful" taste.
Saito and H. Issei? Two disgusting characters in one story. You have "wonderful" taste.
12/22/2018 c8 Helper
This reeks of wish fullfilment and crappy writing.
This reeks of wish fullfilment and crappy writing.
3/24/2018 c7 Vercingetorix Rex
why Kenta, with his knowledge of the events didn't try to influence above by preventing the death of Issei and Asia?
That would not have much changed for Issei because he would have chosen to become a devil of his own will
Personally I do not see too much what kenta can bring to this fanfiction because what is the interest in being aware of events if kenta does nothing to change them?
why Kenta, with his knowledge of the events didn't try to influence above by preventing the death of Issei and Asia?
That would not have much changed for Issei because he would have chosen to become a devil of his own will
Personally I do not see too much what kenta can bring to this fanfiction because what is the interest in being aware of events if kenta does nothing to change them?
3/13/2018 c1 Vercingetorix Rex
good start, even though I think the oc is too much, the presence of Saito and Issei was more than adequate
good start, even though I think the oc is too much, the presence of Saito and Issei was more than adequate
11/28/2017 c1 bob
good story
dont add louise
good story
dont add louise
5/9/2017 c2 
12ralf07
Didn't noticed you already write the story. i was about to do part two of this story but since you already did that, do you want to see my version of part 2? i write it if you want, if not then it fine.
12ralf07Didn't noticed you already write the story. i was about to do part two of this story but since you already did that, do you want to see my version of part 2? i write it if you want, if not then it fine.
4/24/2017 c3 Amatsumi
The reaction of background characters feels similar to that of a Gary Stu showing up.
The reaction of background characters feels similar to that of a Gary Stu showing up.