for Ben 10 and Star vs the forces of evil4/14/2018 c57 Dragon storm
Great chapter is always. Thank you for responding to my review. The crossover idea I thought it would have been fun to read.
Great chapter is always. Thank you for responding to my review. The crossover idea I thought it would have been fun to read.
4/14/2018 c57 
47awsomerebel55
Nice chapter, I liked how you combined Bon Bon and the episode with Kevin and Darkstar. I really hope that Moon gets to meet Rath. Look forward to your next chapter.
47awsomerebel55Nice chapter, I liked how you combined Bon Bon and the episode with Kevin and Darkstar. I really hope that Moon gets to meet Rath. Look forward to your next chapter.
4/14/2018 c57 1Brandon Vortex
You know I can imagine star in Ben 10 alien force style and not the style like in original show, ludo and his henchmen including mewni monster were style in original show l, star parents in style of alien force look, Tom too included
Also did star in this crossover wear her original clothes like in the TV show or she wear earth clothes that fit alien force style?
1Brandon VortexYou know I can imagine star in Ben 10 alien force style and not the style like in original show, ludo and his henchmen including mewni monster were style in original show l, star parents in style of alien force look, Tom too included
Also did star in this crossover wear her original clothes like in the TV show or she wear earth clothes that fit alien force style?
4/14/2018 c57 5Gamelover41592
excellent work on this chapter what made you decide this episode was going to be mashed with the one where she loses her spellbook?
5Gamelover41592excellent work on this chapter what made you decide this episode was going to be mashed with the one where she loses her spellbook?
4/10/2018 c56 Guest
Are you going to do the episode "Heinous" ?
Are you going to do the episode "Heinous" ?
4/4/2018 c56 Dragon storm
I just want to give you some advice. First off divide this story into a series one for each one of Ben's tens shows you don't want the story to get too many chapters this story almost has 60 and you're not even done with the Alien Force. Secondly I suggest you move the battle of mewni to before the Alien Force season finale.
I just want to give you some advice. First off divide this story into a series one for each one of Ben's tens shows you don't want the story to get too many chapters this story almost has 60 and you're not even done with the Alien Force. Secondly I suggest you move the battle of mewni to before the Alien Force season finale.
4/3/2018 c56 benalien100
When is everyone on Mewni and most importantly star's mom and dad going to see ben transform and what will their reaction be. What's the idea that vilgax goes to Mewni and overthrows it or that when the time comes for diagon to appear and start attacking dimensions and all comes together to battle him and his army.
When is everyone on Mewni and most importantly star's mom and dad going to see ben transform and what will their reaction be. What's the idea that vilgax goes to Mewni and overthrows it or that when the time comes for diagon to appear and start attacking dimensions and all comes together to battle him and his army.
4/2/2018 c56 Dragon storm
I thought of a cool little crossover I call it ben 10 and star vs sailor moon and sailor sun. It's a crossover between your two series I haven't really thought it what would happen I just thought it was a cool idea. Plus I might be surprised there are so few sailor moon and star vs. The forces of evil crossovers I mean Sailor Moon was the inspiration for star vs the forces of evil
I thought of a cool little crossover I call it ben 10 and star vs sailor moon and sailor sun. It's a crossover between your two series I haven't really thought it what would happen I just thought it was a cool idea. Plus I might be surprised there are so few sailor moon and star vs. The forces of evil crossovers I mean Sailor Moon was the inspiration for star vs the forces of evil
4/1/2018 c56 Guest
Good story even with some minor grammar problems
Good story even with some minor grammar problems
3/30/2018 c56 benalien100
Are planning on doing a chapter on season 2 episode 16 baby from star vs the forces of evil because if you do then both star and ben will have to be evaluated(to see if ben is worthy of becoming king) by baby and see's star's behavior and ben's as well including his transformations and will tell the queen and say that both of them reminders her of eclipsa and her monster husband which will shock both the king and queen and the queen will see star as eclipsa and thinks of ben as a monster(not in a bad way).
Does this sound like the perfect way or not.
Are planning on doing a chapter on season 2 episode 16 baby from star vs the forces of evil because if you do then both star and ben will have to be evaluated(to see if ben is worthy of becoming king) by baby and see's star's behavior and ben's as well including his transformations and will tell the queen and say that both of them reminders her of eclipsa and her monster husband which will shock both the king and queen and the queen will see star as eclipsa and thinks of ben as a monster(not in a bad way).
Does this sound like the perfect way or not.