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5/21/2018 c60 Dragon storm
After checking the episode guide I know the next episode in star vs the forces of evil is running with Scissors but I don't think that episode really works in the series for multiple reasons 1 Ben would never mess with star dimensional scissors it's an unspoken rule in a relationship never mess with the other stuff. 2 a lot of Ben's alien forms could handle hekapoo no problem echo echo Big Chill Humungousaur pretty much any of his forms take her easy
5/21/2018 c60 Dragon storm
I just want to clarify some things 1 the prize idea is just a suggestion what the prize is your decision. 2 I suggested that you crossover your story I'm not telling you to it's your up totally up to you and since you're not doing it I completely understand. 3 I believe Ben car got destroyed during the Omniverse episode Rules of Engagement and would reconfigured into Ben''s motorcycle the 10 speed but I'm not 100% sure.
5/19/2018 c59 benalien100
And another reason why ultimate kevin should go to Mewni is because I think that he's more powerful than meteora since he is part ghostfreak so his soul can't be absorb by her.

Also I really hoping you make diagon will be an enemy that the magic commission will have to get involve because that demon is more powerful than ultimate kevin, meteora, and globgor.

I don't know anything about globgor, hoping that the 4th season of star vs the forces of evil will show for everyone.
5/21/2018 c60 warhaven22
Dang I have a question for you have you considered the possibility of alien X becoming Ultimate Alien X it was stated in the Ben 10 Ultimate Alien that any transformation could be put through the evolutionary feature of the ultramatrix it would be cool I at least think so
5/21/2018 c60 171EvaShinobiKaiserKnight
Nice chapter bro I was honestly expecting KEvin to screw them over somehow. But well I'm very glad Star passed even if just barely. Also I don't get how Baby things the other spellbook from Gwen is stolen when Gwen was there to confirmed Star borrowed it. Anyway I hope the next chapter will be up soon bro and I must ask if it will be a Ben 10 chapter or a SvtFoE chapter.

Anyway stay frosty this summer bro.
5/21/2018 c60 StrongGuy159
Cool chapter continue please.
5/21/2018 c60 5Gamelover41592
nice job on this chapter
5/21/2018 c60 1jesus
Cool
5/21/2018 c60 51awsomerebel55
Nice chapter, although I thought Ben would have a greater impact on this episode. It was good that there is that same feeling of foreboding when Eclipsa was mentioned. I cannot wait to see Moon's reaction to Ben transforming. Also I must point out, please, please, please make Eclipsa evil like she should. Do not be afraid to go off script or make your own.
5/21/2018 c60 1Hero Time 81
Awesome chapter! Keep up the good work!
5/13/2018 c59 Dragon storm
There is something I like to suggest. During Omniverse make Ben 17 and star 16 I found it very hard to believe that the events of alien Swarm Ultimate Alien and Omniverse all took place in under a year. That would also give Ben a chance to teach Star how to drive
5/12/2018 c59 Dragon storm
I have an idea how they cover art thing doesn't have to be a burden to anyone make it into a contest whoever makes the best cover for the story gets their own fan-made chapter you know they give you an idea for a chapter and you try to put into the story or make it non-canon like a one-shot or something
5/12/2018 c59 Dragon storm
Thank you for answering my questions but I do have a problem with that time period you gave us aliens swarm took place in February( it was mentioned in the movie) and star crushed took place in June( we know this because there was an end of the school year party and the school year ends in June. And the time skip between the end of season 2 and the beginning of 3 couldn't have been that long if you had to be a week or two tops
5/12/2018 c59 benalien100
Will I can thing of ways ultimate kevin can go to different dimensions like when he battle ben or star and the dimensional scissor's get dropped so he gets it and remembers what they can do so he does it and goes to Mewni, but when he gets there and goes to a village or the one close to the kingdom, the people will start looking at him and calls him a monster and be scared or anger at him and tell him to leave( which is racist and not a good choice) but kevin decides to attack the people to know not to mess with him and they all run away. He starts attack the other kingdoms and the magic commission, mina, and moon to get rid of him but he beats them and absorbs their magic( and he will make them afraid of him for the rest of their lives) and sends them to the null void.

I know it sounds dark and evil but they need to learn a lesson about what it good or evil for the way they judge monsters, meteroa, and eclipsa, so I though that ultimate evil will the one who those it when he beats them, takes their magic, sends them to a place that they need to learn about it, and when he runs everything. But can you do make a favor and not make them hate him when his madness ends plus that mina doesn't kill him okay. I just hope you make it happen.
5/11/2018 c59 Guest
oh yeah Rath!
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