for the gods and the mortals and i don't know what I am2/7/2018 c2 imabordman
i get the demon reference sir, angels and demons. And
i agree its a good story
i get the demon reference sir, angels and demons. And
i agree its a good story
6/11/2017 c5 
4GeneralAllenWalker
Wow this is really confusing maybe try to line it more together. The ground principe Seems good but the way you write it makes very Hard to read. Try to rewrite it with a Bit more backstory and a different write style
4GeneralAllenWalkerWow this is really confusing maybe try to line it more together. The ground principe Seems good but the way you write it makes very Hard to read. Try to rewrite it with a Bit more backstory and a different write style
5/12/2017 c5 Naughtbeast
Heyo, it's Naughtbeast here! I like where you're going with the story and the concept is pretty well done, I think it'll be a real hit once you fix up some of the spelling errors and use capital letters properly, other than that's its a good read
Heyo, it's Naughtbeast here! I like where you're going with the story and the concept is pretty well done, I think it'll be a real hit once you fix up some of the spelling errors and use capital letters properly, other than that's its a good read