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6/27/2017 c11 7Taeniaea
cool story
6/14/2017 c9 WitchDoc
Nice job mate just got to keep going
6/9/2017 c9 X3runner
Good chapter , personally I think goku chapters have a greater impact when his character is used sparingly it makes him look like a much more solid character but that's just my opinion.
6/9/2017 c9 WitchDoc
Why do you refer to Gohan as "the boy" so often (not flame) is it the way you write
6/9/2017 c1 WitchDoc
A chapter with goku on snake way is like filler so it's up to you but I wouldn't
6/3/2017 c8 bloodredmoon22
Thanks for the chapter
5/30/2017 c8 WitchDoc
Your eighth chapter was a bit filler but it was important to the main characters storys don't ve so hard on yourself
5/30/2017 c8 X3runner
Do they know that they are not blood related?
5/20/2017 c5 WitchDoc
No problem is the final battle gonna be between Gohan and Arko that would be cool or at least they have to a serious fight after gohan beats cell Arko's legendary power vs Gohans teenage anger
5/11/2017 c5 X3runner
It seems that Arko and gohan have complementary personalitys it will be cool to see how they develop together potentially helping each other become more compleat individuals. Along with pushing g eacholther to become stronger.
5/10/2017 c1 WitchDoc
This is pretty good actually

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