for Ed and the Order of the Phoenix6/23/2022 c42 animesims
I always love how the way Ed proposes to Winry! Gets me every time! And Peeves embarrassing them is hilarious!
I always love how the way Ed proposes to Winry! Gets me every time! And Peeves embarrassing them is hilarious!
6/12/2019 c42 Guest
SO DAMN CUTE
SO DAMN CUTE
6/11/2019 c8 Guest
Lol that last part
Al is the best
Lol that last part
Al is the best
4/22/2018 c1 Amberwolf2377
Re reading this while I wait for you up date on the third part of this story since I love it so much! Just finisged the first part now onto the second!
Re reading this while I wait for you up date on the third part of this story since I love it so much! Just finisged the first part now onto the second!
5/13/2017 c34 Guest
I love your fic, I just wanted to point out that you wrote Dumbledore into the chapter, he should be gone by now as Umbridge is headmistress. Have a nice day.
I love your fic, I just wanted to point out that you wrote Dumbledore into the chapter, he should be gone by now as Umbridge is headmistress. Have a nice day.
5/13/2017 c42 
4Joker Oak
Hmmmm all looking good. I did find one editing issue some chapters back when Ed earned a months worth of detention for knocking Lee Jordan out of the commentary seat. Dumbledore appeared although he'd already fled the school. Something you may wish to look into.
4Joker OakHmmmm all looking good. I did find one editing issue some chapters back when Ed earned a months worth of detention for knocking Lee Jordan out of the commentary seat. Dumbledore appeared although he'd already fled the school. Something you may wish to look into.
5/11/2017 c32 123983
I'm curious what the letters say and what Roy wants to talk to them about in his office.
I'm curious what the letters say and what Roy wants to talk to them about in his office.
5/6/2017 c1 123983
Loving these chapters! Malfoy just doesn't learn to not be a spoiled brat and Umbridge is just despicable as usual.
Loving these chapters! Malfoy just doesn't learn to not be a spoiled brat and Umbridge is just despicable as usual.
5/4/2017 c15 2Evinco
I love it. Malfoy got under Ed's skin with his father issues. Is Edward going to have heavy comments about Mr. Malfoy's love for Draco as well? If Al sees that heavy comment about Malfoy's father, you could work with emotional weight of Ed's, Al's, and Draco's father issues.
2EvincoI love it. Malfoy got under Ed's skin with his father issues. Is Edward going to have heavy comments about Mr. Malfoy's love for Draco as well? If Al sees that heavy comment about Malfoy's father, you could work with emotional weight of Ed's, Al's, and Draco's father issues.
5/2/2017 c15 123983
Malfoy deserved that punch, but too bad that Ed had to get detention. At least it wasn't Umbridge's detention, though.
Malfoy deserved that punch, but too bad that Ed had to get detention. At least it wasn't Umbridge's detention, though.