for Ephemerality12/18/2023 c12 
1ReadingAddict335
It is such a emotionally draining but also heart warming story. Like the variety of emotions you feel while reading the ch is incredible.
Love your writing
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1ReadingAddict335It is such a emotionally draining but also heart warming story. Like the variety of emotions you feel while reading the ch is incredible.
Love your writing
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11/9/2023 c10 q1234567
na shit wait holdon. was rereading this and realized that Apollo is spitting straight fax lmfaooo. Nah I'm taking Apollo's on this one
na shit wait holdon. was rereading this and realized that Apollo is spitting straight fax lmfaooo. Nah I'm taking Apollo's on this one
5/14/2023 c12 2q1234567
ngl i thought u were gonna kill jasmine in some monster attack when he was exiled. like he fails to save her or something. but then like how were you gonna keep percy alive during the time he was asleep idk
2q1234567ngl i thought u were gonna kill jasmine in some monster attack when he was exiled. like he fails to save her or something. but then like how were you gonna keep percy alive during the time he was asleep idk
3/12/2023 c12 1Osravix
Years later i come to check and to my delight it is finished. Thank you for your hard work, i salute you :)
1OsravixYears later i come to check and to my delight it is finished. Thank you for your hard work, i salute you :)
2/17/2023 c12 iNeptune
Wow, this story was beautifully crafted and I loved every moment of it. I’m so glad you decided to finish it, even though I only found you and your stories recently. I look forward to reading more of them.
Wow, this story was beautifully crafted and I loved every moment of it. I’m so glad you decided to finish it, even though I only found you and your stories recently. I look forward to reading more of them.
1/13/2023 c12 8ShadowedDarkness1230
This was absolutely incredible. I went into this with (and I say this with the utmost respect entitled to writers within the PJO fandom) reasonably mild expectations, as I have been trained out of expecting quality writing and ideas.
I knew from the first paragraph that this story was different, but I never expected to love this as much as I do. This is so, so well written. Both Percy and Artemis have significant character, an accomplishment that in itself makes this story stand out compared to many in this fandom. Your prose is a joy to read, yet another factor that is almost never true within the PJO fandom.
The storyline itself seems well thought out and works brilliantly.
I could very easily point out a few more things that I love about this story, but I will not bore you with my opinions of your writing.
Let me close with this: I do not think I've read a PJO story that tops this one. Thank you so much for writing and posting this wonderful story.
8ShadowedDarkness1230This was absolutely incredible. I went into this with (and I say this with the utmost respect entitled to writers within the PJO fandom) reasonably mild expectations, as I have been trained out of expecting quality writing and ideas.
I knew from the first paragraph that this story was different, but I never expected to love this as much as I do. This is so, so well written. Both Percy and Artemis have significant character, an accomplishment that in itself makes this story stand out compared to many in this fandom. Your prose is a joy to read, yet another factor that is almost never true within the PJO fandom.
The storyline itself seems well thought out and works brilliantly.
I could very easily point out a few more things that I love about this story, but I will not bore you with my opinions of your writing.
Let me close with this: I do not think I've read a PJO story that tops this one. Thank you so much for writing and posting this wonderful story.
1/9/2023 c12 Maou-Yuusha
This story has got me in tears. Thank you for putting in the time and effort to complete this.
This story has got me in tears. Thank you for putting in the time and effort to complete this.
1/9/2023 c12 1Shin Jam
I'm gonna pretend that Percy became immortal so that Artemis's sacrifice won't be jn vain. And they live happily ever after
1Shin JamI'm gonna pretend that Percy became immortal so that Artemis's sacrifice won't be jn vain. And they live happily ever after
1/9/2023 c1 Ashborn
Thanks for finishing this dude. I loved the story and wish you well on your life! Spent the whole night reading this and finish and It definitely was worth it. Thanks for making my final day of Christmas Break enjoyable!
Thanks for finishing this dude. I loved the story and wish you well on your life! Spent the whole night reading this and finish and It definitely was worth it. Thanks for making my final day of Christmas Break enjoyable!
1/8/2023 c12 jbugay501
Fantastic finish maybe a chapter about their lives after the story ends. Their life to Percy’s death or he does become immortal. Their children who knows. Nonetheless, one of the best pertemis stories and happy to see it finished.
Fantastic finish maybe a chapter about their lives after the story ends. Their life to Percy’s death or he does become immortal. Their children who knows. Nonetheless, one of the best pertemis stories and happy to see it finished.