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8/31/2018 c1 Guest
Eso de la taza de té fue bastante asqueroso de leer
Eso de la taza de té fue bastante asqueroso de leer
8/31/2018 c63 Guest
um what? This fic is super good. It's full of twists and turns and I'm so confused about so many things (the last 2 chapters in particular) and I really hope you update this story again soon! I almost feel like I have to reread it to see if I can pick up the hints you say were there this time, cause I don't think I was expecting a. Masaru to know Akari was alive, and b. that the masked (wo)man in red was working with Akari, Hinata, and at least 1 more unnamed person. How did she make it out of the massacre? How did Masaru find out?
Well anyways, thank you for posting your work and taking so much time to do your OC's and story the justice that you have, and please do post again soon!
um what? This fic is super good. It's full of twists and turns and I'm so confused about so many things (the last 2 chapters in particular) and I really hope you update this story again soon! I almost feel like I have to reread it to see if I can pick up the hints you say were there this time, cause I don't think I was expecting a. Masaru to know Akari was alive, and b. that the masked (wo)man in red was working with Akari, Hinata, and at least 1 more unnamed person. How did she make it out of the massacre? How did Masaru find out?
Well anyways, thank you for posting your work and taking so much time to do your OC's and story the justice that you have, and please do post again soon!
8/3/2018 c55 Guest
Hi here to say that I love this story but I'm a bit confused. What happened to ryoko?
Hi here to say that I love this story but I'm a bit confused. What happened to ryoko?
8/1/2018 c63 KadeBear
Whoa this chapter is heavy. Can't believe how broken Hinata has been i feel for her. This is an insane twist who all is with Akari so many possibilities Can't wait for the next chapter!
Whoa this chapter is heavy. Can't believe how broken Hinata has been i feel for her. This is an insane twist who all is with Akari so many possibilities Can't wait for the next chapter!
8/1/2018 c60 KadeBear
Hmm so is Naruto staying in the village then? That'll be interesting, wonder what kiba could need in the uchiha compound. Things are getting interesting
Hmm so is Naruto staying in the village then? That'll be interesting, wonder what kiba could need in the uchiha compound. Things are getting interesting
7/29/2018 c63 
1dreckman
Holy shit, I did not see that coming. This chapter is great, good flow, interesting story and so on. I can't wait to see how you handled akari, and what akatsuki's actions will be in this alternate universe. I wish I could make this review longer, but i have to get out of the train.
1dreckmanHoly shit, I did not see that coming. This chapter is great, good flow, interesting story and so on. I can't wait to see how you handled akari, and what akatsuki's actions will be in this alternate universe. I wish I could make this review longer, but i have to get out of the train.
7/27/2018 c28 KadeBear
This chapter has me convinced that Ryoko is actually a SI that was either unable or unwilling to change to much to impact the story. Or maybe she tried to and then her mental breakdown occurs hmmm theories. We are reading the story of a SI's kids. No idea if it's true or not however I like to think so.
This chapter has me convinced that Ryoko is actually a SI that was either unable or unwilling to change to much to impact the story. Or maybe she tried to and then her mental breakdown occurs hmmm theories. We are reading the story of a SI's kids. No idea if it's true or not however I like to think so.
7/27/2018 c63 9meggoneggo
Christ Almighty, this was great to read. I came here from Bloody Oracle because you said you were more proud of this story, and I had my doubts a few chapters in cuz bloody Oracle is fantastic, but this is fantastic too. the twists you put in this story are great and I love reading your work! I can't wait for you to update this and bloody Oracle
9meggoneggoChrist Almighty, this was great to read. I came here from Bloody Oracle because you said you were more proud of this story, and I had my doubts a few chapters in cuz bloody Oracle is fantastic, but this is fantastic too. the twists you put in this story are great and I love reading your work! I can't wait for you to update this and bloody Oracle
7/25/2018 c8 KadeBear
This chapter actually made me tear up, loved the Kakashi pov. I remember reading this for the first time and I was so saddened when I saw that Akari had died. Reading the second time around though I'm catching some things that I missed mainly that to me Hiruzens order seems slightly suspicious with the wording. "You have already seen to much." That almost sounds to me like he is hiding something from Kakashi rather than trying to protect him.
This chapter actually made me tear up, loved the Kakashi pov. I remember reading this for the first time and I was so saddened when I saw that Akari had died. Reading the second time around though I'm catching some things that I missed mainly that to me Hiruzens order seems slightly suspicious with the wording. "You have already seen to much." That almost sounds to me like he is hiding something from Kakashi rather than trying to protect him.
7/24/2018 c63 NavyNinjaHo
Oh my God oh my god, came here after seeing you mention it in the Bloody Oracle and oh my God oh my god why did I never look at this before. I'm currently on holidays in Spain and this story made me focus solely on F the past two days. Literally everytime I sat down at the theme park I swished out my phone to read EoL. It's sooo goooooood. Like honest to God one of the best fics I've ever read across all fandoms. Too bad I came so late and when i finally caught up *sigh* cliffhanger. I really look forward to more chapters in the future, from both EoL and Bloody Oracle~
Oh my God oh my god, came here after seeing you mention it in the Bloody Oracle and oh my God oh my god why did I never look at this before. I'm currently on holidays in Spain and this story made me focus solely on F the past two days. Literally everytime I sat down at the theme park I swished out my phone to read EoL. It's sooo goooooood. Like honest to God one of the best fics I've ever read across all fandoms. Too bad I came so late and when i finally caught up *sigh* cliffhanger. I really look forward to more chapters in the future, from both EoL and Bloody Oracle~
7/24/2018 c63 1Spades231
Have a wonderful vacation. Also, cool chapter. The back and forth in the timeline felt a little too Snyder like for me, I think that’s the director who does that all the time? But you pulled it off pretty well. At the end there I actually smiled at seeing/reading Hinata be reunited with someone who isn’t an asshole...or optimism personified...or seemingly the all knowing son of someone...Is Masaru possessed? Anyway! Awesome chapter, now to hit F5 until August.
1Spades231Have a wonderful vacation. Also, cool chapter. The back and forth in the timeline felt a little too Snyder like for me, I think that’s the director who does that all the time? But you pulled it off pretty well. At the end there I actually smiled at seeing/reading Hinata be reunited with someone who isn’t an asshole...or optimism personified...or seemingly the all knowing son of someone...Is Masaru possessed? Anyway! Awesome chapter, now to hit F5 until August.