for Echoes of Light4/28/2018 c37 
17Kayo-San
Well, he's in denial now, but it went down. Now does this mean we won't have a good Gaara as Kazekage later? I doubt it.
17Kayo-SanWell, he's in denial now, but it went down. Now does this mean we won't have a good Gaara as Kazekage later? I doubt it.
4/28/2018 c36 Kayo-San
Okay nope didn't get Itachi factored in but the other half of the seal which they don't see might become a problem, and Konan will have to use paper somewhere along the way~
Okay nope didn't get Itachi factored in but the other half of the seal which they don't see might become a problem, and Konan will have to use paper somewhere along the way~
4/28/2018 c35 Kayo-San
I'm going to call and say Orochimaru summons the first and second as usual, but the second has countermeasures to prevent edo tensei from working perfectly.
I'm going to call and say Orochimaru summons the first and second as usual, but the second has countermeasures to prevent edo tensei from working perfectly.
4/28/2018 c30 Kayo-San
Oh no Hinahina... Please say a cat has a letter for her from Akari or something
Oh no Hinahina... Please say a cat has a letter for her from Akari or something
4/28/2018 c25 Kayo-San
What about Tsunade? Well, I think the seals are mostly for people whom Ryoko wants safe because they can help Masaru and Sasuke in the future.
What about Tsunade? Well, I think the seals are mostly for people whom Ryoko wants safe because they can help Masaru and Sasuke in the future.
4/28/2018 c14 Kayo-San
I saw Yamato in the tags and hoping to see him soon~ That said, I like Sasuke here, particularly how he treats Masaru. Can't help but feel sorry for Kakashi, knowing that Masaru can't fill that gap though...
I saw Yamato in the tags and hoping to see him soon~ That said, I like Sasuke here, particularly how he treats Masaru. Can't help but feel sorry for Kakashi, knowing that Masaru can't fill that gap though...
4/17/2018 c52 Darksoul
Yo :v
Pues la verdad me encanto el capitulo
Masaruxfuu
( ese sera mi lema de ahora en adelante ) xd
Yo :v
Pues la verdad me encanto el capitulo
Masaruxfuu
( ese sera mi lema de ahora en adelante ) xd
4/14/2018 c52 3May525
No prob, you gotta do what you gotta do, as long as you keep updating the good stuff, I'ma fine with it. Also, I like the new cover's picture, though I don't think it really matches your fanfic as well as the last one(assuming the last one was the red masked, you know who. I'm assuming becuase I usually use my phone to read, so I probably won't know if any covers have been changed, probably). And last but not least, I believe you will know what couple I speak of when I mention Firefly~.(I'm starting think I might start mentioning their couple every review... Maybe.) P. S. I think your fanfic has cursed me to write these long reviews, or is it a blessing? (Jus' kid'in)
3May525No prob, you gotta do what you gotta do, as long as you keep updating the good stuff, I'ma fine with it. Also, I like the new cover's picture, though I don't think it really matches your fanfic as well as the last one(assuming the last one was the red masked, you know who. I'm assuming becuase I usually use my phone to read, so I probably won't know if any covers have been changed, probably). And last but not least, I believe you will know what couple I speak of when I mention Firefly~.(I'm starting think I might start mentioning their couple every review... Maybe.) P. S. I think your fanfic has cursed me to write these long reviews, or is it a blessing? (Jus' kid'in)
4/13/2018 c52 BloodRaven46
Did he just quote Super Mario Bros? I get it! Our favorite masked man is an SI from 'our' world!
Did he just quote Super Mario Bros? I get it! Our favorite masked man is an SI from 'our' world!
4/13/2018 c52 Shinobi of the Hidden Leaf
Okay... something kinda dawned on me during this chapter. Something I should have thought of long ago. Is this fucking masked man actually the blatantly obvious possibility of Obito? He pretty much looks like a red Tobi. And we all have seen how much has been changed by Masaru's mother, so was something she did enough to change Obito in a way in which he didn't return to Konoha but didn't follow along with Madara's schemes? Just a hypothesis though...
Okay... something kinda dawned on me during this chapter. Something I should have thought of long ago. Is this fucking masked man actually the blatantly obvious possibility of Obito? He pretty much looks like a red Tobi. And we all have seen how much has been changed by Masaru's mother, so was something she did enough to change Obito in a way in which he didn't return to Konoha but didn't follow along with Madara's schemes? Just a hypothesis though...