for Forget I was here4/30/2017 c1 Guest
I liked this. Very emotional for such a short fanfiction.
I liked this. Very emotional for such a short fanfiction.
4/29/2017 c1 Guest
I liked the letter parts.
I liked the letter parts.
4/29/2017 c1 
4Glacious
Ah well, I enjoyed this. I certainly enjoyed this. Your writing's pretty solid. The style is pretty easy on the eye. And unlike me, you don't seem to be locked in a fucking fight to the death with punctuation. Which, in my opinion, is always a positive. The imagery's pretty good. And while I haven't read a whole lot of romantic fics, this seems to be the right way to go about writing one.
Other than that, there's not much to comment on here. That's often the case with one shots. I hope you start writing that novel length fanfic soon. Will definitely read that. Anyway, cheers and all the best!
4GlaciousAh well, I enjoyed this. I certainly enjoyed this. Your writing's pretty solid. The style is pretty easy on the eye. And unlike me, you don't seem to be locked in a fucking fight to the death with punctuation. Which, in my opinion, is always a positive. The imagery's pretty good. And while I haven't read a whole lot of romantic fics, this seems to be the right way to go about writing one.
Other than that, there's not much to comment on here. That's often the case with one shots. I hope you start writing that novel length fanfic soon. Will definitely read that. Anyway, cheers and all the best!