for COBRA Meetings are the Worst6/13/2017 c1 
3LoveKiraSen
It's short. I mean they could have been a surprised reaction. It isn't like Alex can actually get up and say hey Ben ! A few more reactions from students and the teacher and Ben would have made it funny. I'm the whole it's cool
3LoveKiraSenIt's short. I mean they could have been a surprised reaction. It isn't like Alex can actually get up and say hey Ben ! A few more reactions from students and the teacher and Ben would have made it funny. I'm the whole it's cool
6/11/2017 c1 Niamh x
I really like this so far and I do hope that there is sme sort of reveal that leaves the teacher slack jawed and wide eyed Please update soon! Thankyou xx
I really like this so far and I do hope that there is sme sort of reveal that leaves the teacher slack jawed and wide eyed Please update soon! Thankyou xx
5/16/2017 c1 Guest
Short
Short
5/16/2017 c1 Guest
Nice, continue
Nice, continue
5/9/2017 c1 Teddybearcrazy
Cool idea despite the common use, I havn't even seen very many though. To improve you could add a bit where the teacher finds out its a COBRA meeting and her reaction and a little but more of the story, ie Alex leaving, but mainly the length could be improved. I loved it its really good, so please continue writing!
Cool idea despite the common use, I havn't even seen very many though. To improve you could add a bit where the teacher finds out its a COBRA meeting and her reaction and a little but more of the story, ie Alex leaving, but mainly the length could be improved. I loved it its really good, so please continue writing!
5/5/2017 c1 Youya
I liked it. I know how much of an overused plot it is, but I am always fine with reading them. I love incredulity and angst. Your writing wasn't bad either. Will you tweet the summery? I tend to judge the stories from their summaries. (now that I think about it…) it might make the story more attractive to readers' eyes. The amount of words is a discourager too. I'm not saying the story was bad, I'm just saying those are things that might discourage someone. I liked your story.
I liked it. I know how much of an overused plot it is, but I am always fine with reading them. I love incredulity and angst. Your writing wasn't bad either. Will you tweet the summery? I tend to judge the stories from their summaries. (now that I think about it…) it might make the story more attractive to readers' eyes. The amount of words is a discourager too. I'm not saying the story was bad, I'm just saying those are things that might discourage someone. I liked your story.