for In a Split Second9/11 c28 Ensenada
Why go back to crazy bitch Layla?
Why go back to crazy bitch Layla?
1/24 c27 AnastasiaSteeleGrey
I am still wondering how did Leila die?
Did she die by her own bullet meant for Ana?
I am still wondering how did Leila die?
Did she die by her own bullet meant for Ana?
9/8/2022 c28 Reds77
Great chapter. Wow! Just Wow! I actually feel bad for Leila. Reading this chapter made me think she actually loved Christian and would have accepted him anyway she could have him or he offered himself. That first husband needed to die a painful death and see it coming. Awe, I liked Geof lol. SWITCH, lol Geof would have been perfect for Ana lolol. Looking forward to the next chapter. Until Later’s:)
Great chapter. Wow! Just Wow! I actually feel bad for Leila. Reading this chapter made me think she actually loved Christian and would have accepted him anyway she could have him or he offered himself. That first husband needed to die a painful death and see it coming. Awe, I liked Geof lol. SWITCH, lol Geof would have been perfect for Ana lolol. Looking forward to the next chapter. Until Later’s:)
9/8/2022 c28 
4T Traveller
As much as I loathe Elena, I think I sometimes hate Leila even more. Love your writing! Love the story!
4T TravellerAs much as I loathe Elena, I think I sometimes hate Leila even more. Love your writing! Love the story!
9/8/2022 c28 6Krooela
Well, you picked the absolute perfect song...Alanis definately wrote and owns the ultimate "Fuck you asshole" anthem!
Now you also did a fan-friggin-tastic job of giving us a glimpse insidethr fucked up head of Looney Leila.
And, TBH, her description of body fluids and genetalia in the begining...well now I gotta clear my head of that visual before I drag hubby into the bedroom later tonight-LOL!
Excellent chapter...you got into Leila's head like Bugliosi got into Charles Manson's head. Well done Nichole!
6KrooelaWell, you picked the absolute perfect song...Alanis definately wrote and owns the ultimate "Fuck you asshole" anthem!
Now you also did a fan-friggin-tastic job of giving us a glimpse insidethr fucked up head of Looney Leila.
And, TBH, her description of body fluids and genetalia in the begining...well now I gotta clear my head of that visual before I drag hubby into the bedroom later tonight-LOL!
Excellent chapter...you got into Leila's head like Bugliosi got into Charles Manson's head. Well done Nichole!
9/8/2022 c28 9paleseptember10
Deliciously despairing. I did feel a small twinge of empathy for Leila but then it quickly disappeared. She's been using BDSM as therapy instead of using the money CG gave her to stfu and go to actual therapy and I don't know, maybe invest... she wrecked her life further. The tiny silver lining was she she found a man who worshipped her and she decided in a moment of complete insanity that she rather be chasing waterfalls. Well, how'd that turn out, Lee?
9paleseptember10Deliciously despairing. I did feel a small twinge of empathy for Leila but then it quickly disappeared. She's been using BDSM as therapy instead of using the money CG gave her to stfu and go to actual therapy and I don't know, maybe invest... she wrecked her life further. The tiny silver lining was she she found a man who worshipped her and she decided in a moment of complete insanity that she rather be chasing waterfalls. Well, how'd that turn out, Lee?
9/8/2022 c28 joan.goldman.9
That was excellent. I don't ever remember reading Leila story like this. Thank you
That was excellent. I don't ever remember reading Leila story like this. Thank you
8/24/2022 c27 Sonia
Brilliant story Christian is a self ritchous idiot, but he's had a lot to do with Ellena the witch ️ I hope he grows
some knads and starts behaving himself, and I hope anna starts to protect herself and gets stronger and gets rid of the witch and taylor gosh he's just wimpy he needs to start acting like security and tell Christian he will do things his way
Brilliant story Christian is a self ritchous idiot, but he's had a lot to do with Ellena the witch ️ I hope he grows
some knads and starts behaving himself, and I hope anna starts to protect herself and gets stronger and gets rid of the witch and taylor gosh he's just wimpy he needs to start acting like security and tell Christian he will do things his way
8/13/2022 c27 Guest
It truly amazes me how much if a coward Taylor is, and the fact that he had a daughter and can stomach working for someone like Grey...makes me wonder what kind of father he really is.
Money means more to him than morals and ethics and common decency.
It truly amazes me how much if a coward Taylor is, and the fact that he had a daughter and can stomach working for someone like Grey...makes me wonder what kind of father he really is.
Money means more to him than morals and ethics and common decency.