for In The Blood1/12/2022 c18 
7Mondtanz
I loved reading this story and am looking forward to your next update. I hope everything is well with you and your family.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. I think the characters are spot on and the plot is captivating. I'm already looking forward to the next chapter.
7MondtanzI loved reading this story and am looking forward to your next update. I hope everything is well with you and your family.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. I think the characters are spot on and the plot is captivating. I'm already looking forward to the next chapter.
1/8/2022 c18 DiamondsandSweetPeas
I really like the idea of the three of them together, but maybe that's just my poor decision making skills at work
I really like the idea of the three of them together, but maybe that's just my poor decision making skills at work
8/24/2021 c18 Mirage
So she knows where shippo is...some...low level spider youkai. ..really ...but why ...naraku real child...I mean he was male and strong spider hanyou so I could see some lower class spider demon wanting to get some child's of him...and he is only male too... in all this years...possible?
Hmm
...hiei and kagome or kurama and her...hmm not easy...or...you could go crazy with all three? ;)
Good that both are unusual strong. ...you made kagome a bit to powerful , so she maybe needs a male ...or two who really can be on her side and be able to get her out when she see red or does loose control ...and also can keep her under control ...so maybe hiei really is needed as third to kurama. ..with her sometimes to explosive temper
And it looks as if sesshomaru is still the only immune to her powers ...
So they don't go with lab made meat? And for cloning, but without soul...but...what is when one keeps his or hers because they latch on. .or have feelings still even when no soul..? Will they stay alive or be put down still...and do they even know how many years it will take till this cloned baby is born and big enough fakehuman so some can...eat it...and don't they need female to birth them..like with the animal ? Or can they do it in fast way in some class container..?
Hope they other lord who she did tale of his territory will be alright with changes she made ...but it would be his fault for not looking in now and then when something is bothering him...-
So she knows where shippo is...some...low level spider youkai. ..really ...but why ...naraku real child...I mean he was male and strong spider hanyou so I could see some lower class spider demon wanting to get some child's of him...and he is only male too... in all this years...possible?
Hmm
...hiei and kagome or kurama and her...hmm not easy...or...you could go crazy with all three? ;)
Good that both are unusual strong. ...you made kagome a bit to powerful , so she maybe needs a male ...or two who really can be on her side and be able to get her out when she see red or does loose control ...and also can keep her under control ...so maybe hiei really is needed as third to kurama. ..with her sometimes to explosive temper
And it looks as if sesshomaru is still the only immune to her powers ...
So they don't go with lab made meat? And for cloning, but without soul...but...what is when one keeps his or hers because they latch on. .or have feelings still even when no soul..? Will they stay alive or be put down still...and do they even know how many years it will take till this cloned baby is born and big enough fakehuman so some can...eat it...and don't they need female to birth them..like with the animal ? Or can they do it in fast way in some class container..?
Hope they other lord who she did tale of his territory will be alright with changes she made ...but it would be his fault for not looking in now and then when something is bothering him...-
8/24/2021 c14 Mirage
You know..family problems are most often more important than writing next chaps...so when this happens stay at peace and take care if this ...I think we will wait happily some weeks and hope all goes nicely for you.-
I had some thinking on the fake meat and or cloning human ...there should be no trouble as they could make it like this lab made meats ...they just look like a slab of meat in the end...no human look or baby...not like a cow or whatever it should be... so it would not be like cloning a animal raising it to kill it ...them it could have feelings and being like human still ...and that they don't want. ...
But a lab grown meat that is same properties as maybe human meat or deer or boar or bear is alright and shound not make problems. ...-
You know..family problems are most often more important than writing next chaps...so when this happens stay at peace and take care if this ...I think we will wait happily some weeks and hope all goes nicely for you.-
I had some thinking on the fake meat and or cloning human ...there should be no trouble as they could make it like this lab made meats ...they just look like a slab of meat in the end...no human look or baby...not like a cow or whatever it should be... so it would not be like cloning a animal raising it to kill it ...them it could have feelings and being like human still ...and that they don't want. ...
But a lab grown meat that is same properties as maybe human meat or deer or boar or bear is alright and shound not make problems. ...-
8/24/2021 c13 Mirage
You know...I always did think hiei should have been part kitsune too...or cat...or maybe even is...-
You know...I always did think hiei should have been part kitsune too...or cat...or maybe even is...-
8/24/2021 c10 Mirage
Till this point she was a hard worker...nearly self-destructive. ...
But then she learns about the loose of sango and miroku...and also inuyasha ..but only beaks down because of him? Why the other two where more miroku where closer most of the time when inu did run of to meet kikjo or when he was a as till real bastard to her... but she say her best friend was murdered. ..she knows this was a possibility with him beeping hanyou that he would never have reached her time as often don't even get older that 300...so why get upset so big over this.? He could have gone to his brother for protection in this time of month ...he would possible be still thee when his father's blood was strong g enough.., so his stupid pride was at fault ..his u don't need protection and friends...most likely...
And shippo. ..he is young kitsune...trained by sessgomaru...he learns and trains tl be kitsune and maybe even got some many lovers...so he just does as teens do ...lose sense of time...and priority...
The shaving of this ties ...is also a bit her fault. ..would she have followed her alpha and leader ...and not fought back and then tried to get out of them as they had to put her into them...they would never have shaved. ...and he is a bad captor. ..he hopeful learned to look after his captive better and look at the tys often and care for them...I'm the future when ever happen again ...or simply give her an order...she has to follow...when he really means it.
Kurama is sweet-
Till this point she was a hard worker...nearly self-destructive. ...
But then she learns about the loose of sango and miroku...and also inuyasha ..but only beaks down because of him? Why the other two where more miroku where closer most of the time when inu did run of to meet kikjo or when he was a as till real bastard to her... but she say her best friend was murdered. ..she knows this was a possibility with him beeping hanyou that he would never have reached her time as often don't even get older that 300...so why get upset so big over this.? He could have gone to his brother for protection in this time of month ...he would possible be still thee when his father's blood was strong g enough.., so his stupid pride was at fault ..his u don't need protection and friends...most likely...
And shippo. ..he is young kitsune...trained by sessgomaru...he learns and trains tl be kitsune and maybe even got some many lovers...so he just does as teens do ...lose sense of time...and priority...
The shaving of this ties ...is also a bit her fault. ..would she have followed her alpha and leader ...and not fought back and then tried to get out of them as they had to put her into them...they would never have shaved. ...and he is a bad captor. ..he hopeful learned to look after his captive better and look at the tys often and care for them...I'm the future when ever happen again ...or simply give her an order...she has to follow...when he really means it.
Kurama is sweet-
8/23/2021 c5 Mirage
I really don't understand this...why starve himself of the diet he needs.. ? Why not pick up some rapist and murders here and there..some warlord or terrorist ...there are enough...or as hard as it sounds victims in deserted areas like rainforest or such ...who where lost or did go from age ...
Why not eat cow or deer ...fish...from the history of the evolution of the human it is said we are more close to fish too...
And when her youkai helps him...her milo healing power added maybe could give the right kick for his ...stomach hurt ...and a whole pig after starving for month..? Was it not small potions that get bigger for sich cases. ..midoriko is no goddess she does not know everything and she is no demon. ...but I really don't know anything of this situation and the original story of this demon world ..so I may have got it fully wrong- but maybe I understand it in the next chaps
I really don't understand this...why starve himself of the diet he needs.. ? Why not pick up some rapist and murders here and there..some warlord or terrorist ...there are enough...or as hard as it sounds victims in deserted areas like rainforest or such ...who where lost or did go from age ...
Why not eat cow or deer ...fish...from the history of the evolution of the human it is said we are more close to fish too...
And when her youkai helps him...her milo healing power added maybe could give the right kick for his ...stomach hurt ...and a whole pig after starving for month..? Was it not small potions that get bigger for sich cases. ..midoriko is no goddess she does not know everything and she is no demon. ...but I really don't know anything of this situation and the original story of this demon world ..so I may have got it fully wrong- but maybe I understand it in the next chaps
8/5/2021 c18 Guest
Please update this story is really good please need update.
Please update this story is really good please need update.
6/11/2021 c18 Frog
Love the new chapter!
I'm so glad Shippo's been located ;)
I look forward to reading his reunion with Kagome,
Sincerely Frog
P.s. I don't really mind who Kagome's paired with. But, I am partial to Hiei/Kagome too :)
P.p.s. A spider hybrid?... That's not suspicious at all ;)
Love the new chapter!
I'm so glad Shippo's been located ;)
I look forward to reading his reunion with Kagome,
Sincerely Frog
P.s. I don't really mind who Kagome's paired with. But, I am partial to Hiei/Kagome too :)
P.p.s. A spider hybrid?... That's not suspicious at all ;)
6/7/2021 c18 1LadyofTheBlackWings
Yay! I'm so glad this has updated and I can't wait for more, this was one of the first really well written fanfics I found here and was so sad it had stopped for a long while. I hope the writing bug bites again and I can eagerly see where you will take us on this journey. I'm partial to Kagome and Kurama myself but I go with most relationships if it's done in a sensible fashion and you certainly have that gift. keep up the good work and best wishes to you.
1LadyofTheBlackWingsYay! I'm so glad this has updated and I can't wait for more, this was one of the first really well written fanfics I found here and was so sad it had stopped for a long while. I hope the writing bug bites again and I can eagerly see where you will take us on this journey. I'm partial to Kagome and Kurama myself but I go with most relationships if it's done in a sensible fashion and you certainly have that gift. keep up the good work and best wishes to you.
6/6/2021 c18 NaRuKo-InuTaiSHo-XD
exciting story keep it up.
I'm really excited to see how things will continue with Kagome, Hiei, Sesshomaru and Shippo.
Keep writing, I'm excitedly waiting for the next chapter.
exciting story keep it up.
I'm really excited to see how things will continue with Kagome, Hiei, Sesshomaru and Shippo.
Keep writing, I'm excitedly waiting for the next chapter.