5/10/2017 c1 fallin460855
... Bruh gotta say, love the premise and think there are endless possibilities with this, but for the love of GOD please proofread or find a beta. This is honestly painful to read at points, and not in the good way. I'm favoriting either way, but we will all appreciate it so much if you do so.
... Bruh gotta say, love the premise and think there are endless possibilities with this, but for the love of GOD please proofread or find a beta. This is honestly painful to read at points, and not in the good way. I'm favoriting either way, but we will all appreciate it so much if you do so.
5/7/2017 c1 bayhon282004
So Pyrrha will be taking over Saber's place as Shiro's servant? That sounds promising. Please continue the story.
So Pyrrha will be taking over Saber's place as Shiro's servant? That sounds promising. Please continue the story.
5/7/2017 c1 Guest
...It's like you gave up on the summary and the story near the end.
...It's like you gave up on the summary and the story near the end.