for The Life and Times of HonoUmiKanan5/8/2017 c3 
10AshuraX
I am actually quite intrigued by what you could do with this. Though the title could do a little touching up, to be honest. It just sounds plain. (not that I can't say the same to myself) Also, I wonder what happened when Kanan kissed Honoka and what brought her to it. I also want to know Umi's reaction to Kanan finding out about her previous idol activities.
10AshuraXI am actually quite intrigued by what you could do with this. Though the title could do a little touching up, to be honest. It just sounds plain. (not that I can't say the same to myself) Also, I wonder what happened when Kanan kissed Honoka and what brought her to it. I also want to know Umi's reaction to Kanan finding out about her previous idol activities.