for Blooming Stories11/13/2022 c1 Guest
Reread this because it's so good. Thanks for these fanfics and I hope you're doing well right now. 3
Reread this because it's so good. Thanks for these fanfics and I hope you're doing well right now. 3
10/26/2022 c1 Guest
I'm wondering if Lily's father is Hugh...I mean the original story described him being college-aged and having brown hair, and here he's now a teacher.
I'm wondering if Lily's father is Hugh...I mean the original story described him being college-aged and having brown hair, and here he's now a teacher.
6/25/2022 c1 Guest
Random theory that Lily's father is Chaz, since he's the guy who Leni is usually paired up with
Random theory that Lily's father is Chaz, since he's the guy who Leni is usually paired up with
6/8/2022 c1 Guest
I really loved this story. It is very heartwarming and sappy to hear what happened between Leni and Lily's Father (whoever he is). Other than that, I really love this and I think The Blooming Lily AU is my new favorite Loud House AU.
I really loved this story. It is very heartwarming and sappy to hear what happened between Leni and Lily's Father (whoever he is). Other than that, I really love this and I think The Blooming Lily AU is my new favorite Loud House AU.
11/5/2017 c1 
8The Keeper of Worlds
Damn, stab my heart in the roughest way here. I wish she would tell, to let the heart finally heal.
8The Keeper of WorldsDamn, stab my heart in the roughest way here. I wish she would tell, to let the heart finally heal.
10/8/2017 c1 Guest
actualiza porfavo , sigue con la historia
actualiza porfavo , sigue con la historia
5/8/2017 c1 22Gumball2
If I haven't already commented about your stories from this headcanon, I'll do it here.
I find it interesting. I'm supposing that Leni is your favorite character on the show and that's okay (she's mine too). The world you created does lend itself to many stories and I can't wait to see how you take advantage of that.
The thing I'm most curious about is Leni's intelligence in this universe. I can kinda see how Leni would try to restrain herself to make others feel good about themselves. That, I feel, is right in her nature.
As a word of caution (and I believe you're already conscious of this), don't make Leni a Mary Sue. While I wouldn't say it has gotten to that point, there are points in this story (and your other ones) where it feels like Leni can do no wrong. She has it all. She's pretty, she's smart, she's nice, she's a gifted seamstress, she's a successful businesswoman, AND she can sing better than Luna. It's okay to have her have all of these traits to at least some degree, but it's important to also make her a human being. Sure, she had a one night stand, she's deceiving others to hide at least two major secrets. These are good starting points, but don't cling to just those two things. Have her slip up, show us losing her cool at one point.
Of course, I also feel like you already know this and I'm sorry if it comes across as patronizing. I figure it was a view that should be vocalized.
Overall, good job and I am curious for what comes next.
P.S. Your MLP references are quirky, although they make me wonder how it fares with Princess Pony? Are they supposed to be rival franchises?
22Gumball2If I haven't already commented about your stories from this headcanon, I'll do it here.
I find it interesting. I'm supposing that Leni is your favorite character on the show and that's okay (she's mine too). The world you created does lend itself to many stories and I can't wait to see how you take advantage of that.
The thing I'm most curious about is Leni's intelligence in this universe. I can kinda see how Leni would try to restrain herself to make others feel good about themselves. That, I feel, is right in her nature.
As a word of caution (and I believe you're already conscious of this), don't make Leni a Mary Sue. While I wouldn't say it has gotten to that point, there are points in this story (and your other ones) where it feels like Leni can do no wrong. She has it all. She's pretty, she's smart, she's nice, she's a gifted seamstress, she's a successful businesswoman, AND she can sing better than Luna. It's okay to have her have all of these traits to at least some degree, but it's important to also make her a human being. Sure, she had a one night stand, she's deceiving others to hide at least two major secrets. These are good starting points, but don't cling to just those two things. Have her slip up, show us losing her cool at one point.
Of course, I also feel like you already know this and I'm sorry if it comes across as patronizing. I figure it was a view that should be vocalized.
Overall, good job and I am curious for what comes next.
P.S. Your MLP references are quirky, although they make me wonder how it fares with Princess Pony? Are they supposed to be rival franchises?
5/8/2017 c1 70Omega Ultra
Welp, let me get this out of the way: "D'aww" that was cute!
I love how you emphasized the fact that yes, Lily still doesn't know the truth. And how things have changed in 7 years.
Though, I wish there was more thought about future possibilities included. I feel like the idea of Lily having a sibling was great! But what about Leni promising herself to tell Lily the truth when she grew up?
Anyways, great job mate, I rate 10/10!
70Omega UltraWelp, let me get this out of the way: "D'aww" that was cute!
I love how you emphasized the fact that yes, Lily still doesn't know the truth. And how things have changed in 7 years.
Though, I wish there was more thought about future possibilities included. I feel like the idea of Lily having a sibling was great! But what about Leni promising herself to tell Lily the truth when she grew up?
Anyways, great job mate, I rate 10/10!
5/8/2017 c1 1JJChandler
You should do one, where Lincoln was actually Lori's son from a boyfriend previous to Bobby. (:
1JJChandlerYou should do one, where Lincoln was actually Lori's son from a boyfriend previous to Bobby. (: