for Classical Hero11/13/2019 c1 chimera629
Honest given that the bullet he blocked was a sniper round I'm surprised this bullet hit him.
Surprised at his action to killing that guy given the situation and the fact that hes killed before.
Why didn t he just jump in the water instead if waiting around
Honest given that the bullet he blocked was a sniper round I'm surprised this bullet hit him.
Surprised at his action to killing that guy given the situation and the fact that hes killed before.
Why didn t he just jump in the water instead if waiting around
11/11/2019 c9 
18IAmOutOfIdeas
I feel like I’ve already read these chapters. The updates for this story are really confusing. I don’t know if FanFiction is just bugged for me, I’m suffering severe deja vu, or what, but I SWEAR I’ve read this chapter before
18IAmOutOfIdeasI feel like I’ve already read these chapters. The updates for this story are really confusing. I don’t know if FanFiction is just bugged for me, I’m suffering severe deja vu, or what, but I SWEAR I’ve read this chapter before
11/11/2019 c9 xbox432
LoL. Both Taylor and Percy outed themselves on accident. Still, at least this way Taylor's found a possible team and Percy a new teammate. I'll be looking forward to seeing how the conversation with Kayden goes... and I'm still curious about how Percy and Greg met. Something to daydream about I suppose. :D
LoL. Both Taylor and Percy outed themselves on accident. Still, at least this way Taylor's found a possible team and Percy a new teammate. I'll be looking forward to seeing how the conversation with Kayden goes... and I'm still curious about how Percy and Greg met. Something to daydream about I suppose. :D
11/11/2019 c8 xbox432
One opsie that I thought to point out is that at one point you had Taylor call Riptide "Percy" before she'd even been introduced to him. "with every blow Percy rained"
Also, wow, wasn't expecting the... time skip? Greg knowing Percy like that was not something I saw happening. I'll be curious about how they met one another.
One opsie that I thought to point out is that at one point you had Taylor call Riptide "Percy" before she'd even been introduced to him. "with every blow Percy rained"
Also, wow, wasn't expecting the... time skip? Greg knowing Percy like that was not something I saw happening. I'll be curious about how they met one another.
11/11/2019 c8 osterreicher97
Lol, whoops... the cat's out the bag, but they would be good for Taylor. Probably even better than Lisa and the Undersiders were in canon. At least this way, she has a higher chance of developing more heroically with the most genuine hero around. Also, I see Percy has been using the mist it seems, and he possibly either figured out Greg was a Parahuman or Greg was somehow endearing enough in a way that Percy could become friends with him.
Lol, whoops... the cat's out the bag, but they would be good for Taylor. Probably even better than Lisa and the Undersiders were in canon. At least this way, she has a higher chance of developing more heroically with the most genuine hero around. Also, I see Percy has been using the mist it seems, and he possibly either figured out Greg was a Parahuman or Greg was somehow endearing enough in a way that Percy could become friends with him.
7/27/2019 c7 1Beloved Daughter
Really cool story! Can't wait to read more! That's quite the cliffy you have there. Why isn't Lung getting up? Is he faking...? Did Percy accidentally cause more damage to Lung than he realized...?
1Beloved DaughterReally cool story! Can't wait to read more! That's quite the cliffy you have there. Why isn't Lung getting up? Is he faking...? Did Percy accidentally cause more damage to Lung than he realized...?
6/8/2019 c7 1Snappy Flowah
Huh. Honestly didn't expect that. Wonder how that happened?
That said tho... Tsunami-Alert!Percy ftw.
~Snappy~
1Snappy FlowahHuh. Honestly didn't expect that. Wonder how that happened?
That said tho... Tsunami-Alert!Percy ftw.
~Snappy~