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6/7/2020 c36 12ROCuevas
Quite awesome job.
1/1/2020 c35 ROCuevas
Nice job.
11/3/2018 c34 ROCuevas
Quite good.
10/31/2018 c34 Guest
You should try a lucifer fanfic and have the oc be Gabriel since Gabriel hasn’t appeared at all in the tv show and pair with Ella
10/30/2018 c34 Guest
Would you be open to doing a story for sekirei ive got a idea for a oc if your interested

The oc is the son of miya and takehito(miyas late husband)is in highschool and can do the hanya mask thing miya can do

his first sekirei that he wings is uzume because I absolutely love her and I hate how she was used by higa in canon chiho could still be important to uzume but chiho just isn’t her ashikabi tho uzume becomes extremely attached to her like a mother

oc appearance is a mix between takehito and miya so while he looks more like takehito he has miyas eyes and hair colour

For other sekirei oc wings have them be matsu(the perverted sekirei) kaho yashima and akitsu there’s others but they’re names escape me

And for normal girls interested in oc just yukari who’s a big bishonon fan
10/6/2018 c33 ROCuevas
This was good.
6/26/2018 c32 ROCuevas
This was good.
6/19/2018 c31 ROCuevas
Quite well done.
6/18/2018 c2 UnitedLuck
reason why i read the story because i thought it was interesting that you put a tribal oc into the story because i haven't seen anyone else do something like this before. but making a five person team by putting leona on team rwby destroy the whole point of the initiation it is not just to make teams up but also to weed out the weak and the ones the wouldn't make it as huntsman and Huntresses by making five person team you and everyone else who does it basically destroy the whole point of the initiation and i quote ozpin "Do not hesitate to destroy everything in your path... or you will die" ozpin is not joking or lying you can die in the initiation they won't save people in the initiation because it defeat the purpose of it so yes there would be odd numbers of people because if there was only even numbers, if one person dies then the other three wouldn't because huntsman but if there is odd numbers there is a chance the 3 can still be a huntsman

ps this story is good
6/17/2018 c31 girani4
another one!
she seems resonably fine
5/13/2018 c30 ROCuevas
Lol. Quite good work.
3/15/2018 c29 ROCuevas
This was good chapter.
2/25/2018 c28 ROCuevas
Quite good.
2/24/2018 c1 114Gracekim20
Hmmm...the concept is intriguing but you could have had her GP to a school the main characters of the show were not in so it’s a bit more interesting I mean it’s ok to follow some parts of the show(I’ve done it with Volume 5 but I’ve included things to make things more interesting). You see if you just retread Volume 1 without adding anything new or a different twist that helps your OC that it to a new direction, it will be like some of the other stories do you get what I mean? I’ll try to keep reading anyway, just remember you’re allowed to do your own storyline that doesn’t follow the show to a tee.
1/16/2018 c27 12ROCuevas
Amazing work.
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