for Anomaly10/16/2021 c46 Kurruk101
Even though you hate writing fight scenes, I think it was pretty good. Didn’t have the issue of dragging on too long like some do. Thanks for the update.
Even though you hate writing fight scenes, I think it was pretty good. Didn’t have the issue of dragging on too long like some do. Thanks for the update.
10/16/2021 c46 El20030408
great chapter, I loved the fight between Dan and Sairaorg. But I still don't understand why Danhauser douse trust Gabriel or Michael.
great chapter, I loved the fight between Dan and Sairaorg. But I still don't understand why Danhauser douse trust Gabriel or Michael.
10/16/2021 c46 Gilgamesh50
Okay look i realllyy like gabriel because we don’t know much about her every fic she is moetly different but
What Cleria is doing is just plain stupid
She is already a deadweight for Dan
And now she just acts like she knows whats best
I don’t like Cleria maybe it’s my biased opinion
And please add Gabriel (somehow) to Dan’s harem
Okay look i realllyy like gabriel because we don’t know much about her every fic she is moetly different but
What Cleria is doing is just plain stupid
She is already a deadweight for Dan
And now she just acts like she knows whats best
I don’t like Cleria maybe it’s my biased opinion
And please add Gabriel (somehow) to Dan’s harem
10/16/2021 c46 
1AssiriosDM
Always good to see a new chapter!
"Danhauser never realized that the smile on his face was gone by now."
Now that I didn’t understand, maybe because I don't remember something, but why whould he not be happy?
1AssiriosDMAlways good to see a new chapter!
"Danhauser never realized that the smile on his face was gone by now."
Now that I didn’t understand, maybe because I don't remember something, but why whould he not be happy?