for Death God & Devil King6/13/2018 c9 
214Shadow Joestar
KO awesome chapter, Kukaku may think Ichigo is weak for now but she’ll change her opinion on her when she sees him unleashing his true power in battle.
214Shadow JoestarKO awesome chapter, Kukaku may think Ichigo is weak for now but she’ll change her opinion on her when she sees him unleashing his true power in battle.
1/9/2018 c8 Derek 23
please update this, your The Small Sadist and your other storys and in this story please make a new harem list.
please update this, your The Small Sadist and your other storys and in this story please make a new harem list.
12/28/2017 c8 Guest
2 suggestions or just some things to consider.
Firstly I think it would be good to make separate stories having ichigo and ryu as main characters rather than focusing on them both and giving them both harems.
So my suggestion would be to abolish ichigo's harem (you can merge it with ryu's if you want) in this story and just make him a secondary character (or just don't mention him at all) and focus completely on your oc. Then when you feel like you have time, make another lemon story with no OC and ichigo as the main character like you've done for most other series you write about.
Secondly whether or not you think it's good advice to do the first thing could you add some crossover girls to ichigo's harem?
2 suggestions or just some things to consider.
Firstly I think it would be good to make separate stories having ichigo and ryu as main characters rather than focusing on them both and giving them both harems.
So my suggestion would be to abolish ichigo's harem (you can merge it with ryu's if you want) in this story and just make him a secondary character (or just don't mention him at all) and focus completely on your oc. Then when you feel like you have time, make another lemon story with no OC and ichigo as the main character like you've done for most other series you write about.
Secondly whether or not you think it's good advice to do the first thing could you add some crossover girls to ichigo's harem?
12/22/2017 c8 15NinjaFang1331
Awesome job and Ryu not being killed but being held prisoner somewhere.
15NinjaFang1331Awesome job and Ryu not being killed but being held prisoner somewhere.
12/22/2017 c8 Ragna
Since Kukaku will have more screen time in this fic, she know Ryu and have some quality time with him, will Kukaku be in Ryu's harem?
Since Kukaku will have more screen time in this fic, she know Ryu and have some quality time with him, will Kukaku be in Ryu's harem?
12/5/2017 c7 6Mr.unknow
a little confused on how this could play out, but i guess it would be in simular cases but rukia is first to be excuted while ryu is delay... i would think.
6Mr.unknowa little confused on how this could play out, but i guess it would be in simular cases but rukia is first to be excuted while ryu is delay... i would think.
11/24/2017 c7 Guest
Why do not you update the new path of the dragon?
Why do not you update the new path of the dragon?
11/11/2017 c7 214Shadow Joestar
KO awesome chapter, just when Ichigo was gonna save his friends but he’ll get his second chance once he finishes his training to unleash his power and got off to stop them from dying.
214Shadow JoestarKO awesome chapter, just when Ichigo was gonna save his friends but he’ll get his second chance once he finishes his training to unleash his power and got off to stop them from dying.
11/10/2017 c7 shinigamisama455
like this chapter. agreed never really like renji early in cannon and was apathtic to him later on at best. would have gutted him myself .
like this chapter. agreed never really like renji early in cannon and was apathtic to him later on at best. would have gutted him myself .