for Death God & Devil King9/1/2017 c4 Guest
I'm just gonna say it cause shes my fave character and a LOT of stories butcher her personality(which is part of the reason I love her). If Harribel behaves like a love struck puppy I will probably stop reading this. So far you seem to be doing very well with character personalities so stock with it! *big thumbs up*
I'm just gonna say it cause shes my fave character and a LOT of stories butcher her personality(which is part of the reason I love her). If Harribel behaves like a love struck puppy I will probably stop reading this. So far you seem to be doing very well with character personalities so stock with it! *big thumbs up*
8/26/2017 c4 
17Ben56
You don't know how much i wanted for that chapter to end in this way in the anime and manga, whit Ichigo hugging Orihime, thank you i enjoy a lot this chapter, and the part of the training was good to. Thanks for the new chapter, until the next one.
17Ben56You don't know how much i wanted for that chapter to end in this way in the anime and manga, whit Ichigo hugging Orihime, thank you i enjoy a lot this chapter, and the part of the training was good to. Thanks for the new chapter, until the next one.
8/25/2017 c4 2Mike Kromer
Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next.
2Mike KromerMust have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next.
8/3/2017 c3 Guest
oh and for those reviewers who are upsaet that yoriuchi is in ichigo's harem rather than ryu's i am sorry that your upsaet. but i made it for a reason one is i am just a fan of ichigo yoriuchi my other reason is yoriuchi will be instermental in getting ichigo out of his prudish ways along with his hollow. neliel, orihime,riruka and unohana mayallhave rocking bodies but unohana's to subtle, orihime's to shy, riruka is to either shy or tsundere and for now neliel is to innocent, yoriuchi after he gets into the harem relationship yoriuchi with her teasing ways will be instermental in pushing ichigo to the breaking point tell he can't take it anymore and he completely ravishes her or she willpush him to the point were he is a hairs breath away from ravishing whichever girl in the harem pushes him past the limit, as long as it's consentual of course, but yes he willbe in the ravishing mood. and after that he will be far less of a prude at least in private. ryu already has rangiku and lisa and whatever other girl in his harem teaches him, but i will at least tell you this by the time he is through i know the general direction of the story and some detail though i ain'''''''t telling you the details, but for those who argue ichigo is to much of a prude for a harem the women in his harem will break him out of the prudish behavior.
oh and for those reviewers who are upsaet that yoriuchi is in ichigo's harem rather than ryu's i am sorry that your upsaet. but i made it for a reason one is i am just a fan of ichigo yoriuchi my other reason is yoriuchi will be instermental in getting ichigo out of his prudish ways along with his hollow. neliel, orihime,riruka and unohana mayallhave rocking bodies but unohana's to subtle, orihime's to shy, riruka is to either shy or tsundere and for now neliel is to innocent, yoriuchi after he gets into the harem relationship yoriuchi with her teasing ways will be instermental in pushing ichigo to the breaking point tell he can't take it anymore and he completely ravishes her or she willpush him to the point were he is a hairs breath away from ravishing whichever girl in the harem pushes him past the limit, as long as it's consentual of course, but yes he willbe in the ravishing mood. and after that he will be far less of a prude at least in private. ryu already has rangiku and lisa and whatever other girl in his harem teaches him, but i will at least tell you this by the time he is through i know the general direction of the story and some detail though i ain'''''''t telling you the details, but for those who argue ichigo is to much of a prude for a harem the women in his harem will break him out of the prudish behavior.
7/22/2017 c3 Guest
yes ryu will train ichigo to be strong. the other tow women i am pretty sure he means soifon and esdeath. he aalready mentioned rangiku. and i will give you a hint ryu is more than meets the eye.
yes ryu will train ichigo to be strong. the other tow women i am pretty sure he means soifon and esdeath. he aalready mentioned rangiku. and i will give you a hint ryu is more than meets the eye.
7/5/2017 c3 ted
interested in how you will write soi fong.
interested in how you will write soi fong.
7/4/2017 c1 shinigamisama455
in this story ichigo will slowly become un prudish and will get a harem. and what do you think ryu is like well he is more calm and in control then prudish, but it's close enough his zanpakutou's spirits perverted whispering towards the women who he like who like him in a romantic way will after they get into a solid loving relationship make him lustful in private. and ichigo's have you seen shiro(hollow ichigo) he is essentially ichigo's suppressed instincts and lustful desires, as well as his battle loving side.
in this story ichigo will slowly become un prudish and will get a harem. and what do you think ryu is like well he is more calm and in control then prudish, but it's close enough his zanpakutou's spirits perverted whispering towards the women who he like who like him in a romantic way will after they get into a solid loving relationship make him lustful in private. and ichigo's have you seen shiro(hollow ichigo) he is essentially ichigo's suppressed instincts and lustful desires, as well as his battle loving side.
7/2/2017 c3 17Ben56
This is going to be so good, at least Ichigo is bein trained, and the woman Hayuru is from Masou Gakuen HxH, no?. So this means the other two are going to be in this story. Thanks for the new chapter, until next one.
17Ben56This is going to be so good, at least Ichigo is bein trained, and the woman Hayuru is from Masou Gakuen HxH, no?. So this means the other two are going to be in this story. Thanks for the new chapter, until next one.
7/1/2017 c3 shinigamisama455
Also the reason I said yoriuchi to Ichigo is personality. Saigon is like rye always serious on the outside, but a softy to those he cares for. Yoriuchi is serious on occasion like Ichigo and is constantly teasing she will be a help to break prude ichigo's shield.
Also the reason I said yoriuchi to Ichigo is personality. Saigon is like rye always serious on the outside, but a softy to those he cares for. Yoriuchi is serious on occasion like Ichigo and is constantly teasing she will be a help to break prude ichigo's shield.