for Empress Ascendant3/4/2022 c2 
9AMAZING EZ-8
I would think that talor would have some level of disgust, but understanding towards para humans, it's going to be like humans reciveing the powers of caos unwillingly and is totaly oblivious to it.
Hence disgust and understanding with pity
9AMAZING EZ-8I would think that talor would have some level of disgust, but understanding towards para humans, it's going to be like humans reciveing the powers of caos unwillingly and is totaly oblivious to it.
Hence disgust and understanding with pity
3/2/2022 c28 Dalriaden
Glad this is still going and looking forward to more.
Hopefully we can actually get to the tech buildup and chain glave. The pacing is...fast and while it's a fun read all the go go go while leaving behind everything else the emperor has to offer is a downer.
Especially knowing after the teeth it's going to be the nine.
Glad this is still going and looking forward to more.
Hopefully we can actually get to the tech buildup and chain glave. The pacing is...fast and while it's a fun read all the go go go while leaving behind everything else the emperor has to offer is a downer.
Especially knowing after the teeth it's going to be the nine.
3/1/2022 c15 AMAZING EZ-8
" like a rabid dog in an orphanage"
I think the more appropriate place would be "like a priest in a room of qior boys "
" a sex offendor in a orphanage"
For more pg ones
"A kid in a room full of candy "
Or
" a drug addict in a cocaine plant"
" a fat man in a all you can eat dinner"
For war hammer ones
"Like green skins in the warp/ hive fleet " ( they like to fight, in the warp they will have no shortage of things trying to fight them)
" like lorgar near some quior boys"
" like any sleneshi cultist near a hill of warp dust"
" like the blood ravens near any armory"(steal,steal, steal rain!)
" like how big e sodomized horous so hard he died"
" like a deamon invasion on a paradise/ defenceless world"
" like the catan in the war in heaven""(as they ate the necron souls)
" a trynid hive fleet on a paradise world/ agri world"
On a side not i like talor's plan to sodomize eden and zion for fking with humanity then punting the endbgingers so hard that they go into super death
" like a rabid dog in an orphanage"
I think the more appropriate place would be "like a priest in a room of qior boys "
" a sex offendor in a orphanage"
For more pg ones
"A kid in a room full of candy "
Or
" a drug addict in a cocaine plant"
" a fat man in a all you can eat dinner"
For war hammer ones
"Like green skins in the warp/ hive fleet " ( they like to fight, in the warp they will have no shortage of things trying to fight them)
" like lorgar near some quior boys"
" like any sleneshi cultist near a hill of warp dust"
" like the blood ravens near any armory"(steal,steal, steal rain!)
" like how big e sodomized horous so hard he died"
" like a deamon invasion on a paradise/ defenceless world"
" like the catan in the war in heaven""(as they ate the necron souls)
" a trynid hive fleet on a paradise world/ agri world"
On a side not i like talor's plan to sodomize eden and zion for fking with humanity then punting the endbgingers so hard that they go into super death
3/1/2022 c1 AMAZING EZ-8
the begianeing i played string storm's "chaird bound prankster"
holy shiet it felt epic
the writeing is epic
idk the lore and story about worm but i just want good stories about the emps
the begianeing i played string storm's "chaird bound prankster"
holy shiet it felt epic
the writeing is epic
idk the lore and story about worm but i just want good stories about the emps
2/27/2022 c28 3Gizmo Gear
NOOOOOO! CLIFFHANGER!
Ah well, I'm alright with waiting a while for high quality chapters. Can't wait to see the outcome of Taylor vs The Butcher round 2.
3Gizmo GearNOOOOOO! CLIFFHANGER!
Ah well, I'm alright with waiting a while for high quality chapters. Can't wait to see the outcome of Taylor vs The Butcher round 2.
2/19/2022 c1 E
Upon rereading I can't help but think of that bit from One-punch where Saitama is disappointed that all the telekinetic did with his powers was to make rocks fly fast. I can't take that seriously anymore.
Also, name seems kind of weird. Definitely not bog-standard like Aquila (which is good, if boring). Just feels weird.
Didn't bug me when I read what was out for this a while ago, but it just is not really a name I see associating with someone who is supposed to be the reincarnation of Revelation. I have always and always will think that is the best of the Emperor's names, so I've always wanted to see that used in a crossover.
Ah, whatever. Writing's still solid so I'll keep on with my reread to catch up.
Upon rereading I can't help but think of that bit from One-punch where Saitama is disappointed that all the telekinetic did with his powers was to make rocks fly fast. I can't take that seriously anymore.
Also, name seems kind of weird. Definitely not bog-standard like Aquila (which is good, if boring). Just feels weird.
Didn't bug me when I read what was out for this a while ago, but it just is not really a name I see associating with someone who is supposed to be the reincarnation of Revelation. I have always and always will think that is the best of the Emperor's names, so I've always wanted to see that used in a crossover.
Ah, whatever. Writing's still solid so I'll keep on with my reread to catch up.
2/13/2022 c19 Zsombi
The challenges the MC keeps facing, especially with this independent clone of themselves, somehow feel too forced. Their purpose appears to be only providing greater and greater challenges. I don't think ahe needs escalating conflicts.. Iean she has great potential but she's been willingly puttering around bumbling left and right without any real goal wasting time.
I'm not saying, that she should have necessarily hunkered down training and building up, but she should have been thinking a little ahead instead of jumping into every new event heedless of reasons and consequences.
The challenges the MC keeps facing, especially with this independent clone of themselves, somehow feel too forced. Their purpose appears to be only providing greater and greater challenges. I don't think ahe needs escalating conflicts.. Iean she has great potential but she's been willingly puttering around bumbling left and right without any real goal wasting time.
I'm not saying, that she should have necessarily hunkered down training and building up, but she should have been thinking a little ahead instead of jumping into every new event heedless of reasons and consequences.
2/11/2022 c28 Three Ducks
Hyyyyyype
Hyyyyyype
2/8/2022 c28 robert.douglass.3.504.pir
What strikes me as curious is Taylor's power armour. Has she deliberately attempted to pattern her armour after that of the Adeptus Astartes? Is she a Beaky Girl?
What strikes me as curious is Taylor's power armour. Has she deliberately attempted to pattern her armour after that of the Adeptus Astartes? Is she a Beaky Girl?
2/5/2022 c28 Shadow Sword
CLEANSE!PURGE!KILL!CLEANSE!PURGE!KILL!CLEANSE!PURGE!KIIILLLLLL!
CLEANSE!PURGE!KILL!CLEANSE!PURGE!KILL!CLEANSE!PURGE!KIIILLLLLL!
2/5/2022 c28 Guest
Wow, amazing
Wow, amazing
2/4/2022 c28 Guest
wow
wow