
3/25 c46 Guest
okay what the fuck just happened is is cauldron involved
okay what the fuck just happened is is cauldron involved
3/24 c46 Guest
wow
wow
3/25 c46 finstermunker
As always a delight that leaves you wanting more. It’s exciting to see Luna continuing to emerge and unfold from her origins. And her deepest fears brought to life. Excited to see the shifting through the fallout to come.
As always a delight that leaves you wanting more. It’s exciting to see Luna continuing to emerge and unfold from her origins. And her deepest fears brought to life. Excited to see the shifting through the fallout to come.
3/24 c46 robert.douglass.3.504.pir
I was wondering when you were going to get around to a bit of grimdark horror after all this. The slow burns are the best, yes?
But invoking HORUS LUPERCAL? The Arch-Traitor? That's something you're going to have to so some detailed explaining to make sense, and I daresay we"ll all be here for it.
Loving this so far, keep it up!
I was wondering when you were going to get around to a bit of grimdark horror after all this. The slow burns are the best, yes?
But invoking HORUS LUPERCAL? The Arch-Traitor? That's something you're going to have to so some detailed explaining to make sense, and I daresay we"ll all be here for it.
Loving this so far, keep it up!
3/24 c45
1Mr. Medic
Damn! That Mathers shit was quite a trip! Poor Luna being faced with the wrath that consumed Horus in her mind, not knowing what was real, the horror of death at the hand of your progenitor, knowing you didn't really deserve it, hadn't gone deep enough to warrant such a response. Must've been quite the acid trip!

Damn! That Mathers shit was quite a trip! Poor Luna being faced with the wrath that consumed Horus in her mind, not knowing what was real, the horror of death at the hand of your progenitor, knowing you didn't really deserve it, hadn't gone deep enough to warrant such a response. Must've been quite the acid trip!
3/24 c46 Amanwithhobbies
These chapters are more than worth the wait each one is quality and long enough to fill my need for more Warhammer content
These chapters are more than worth the wait each one is quality and long enough to fill my need for more Warhammer content
3/18 c23
1HorusRa
Luna is very Aligned with Khorne? Isnt she?
Also Taylor, did create a Pseudo Astartes Armor o one of the Adeptas Sororitas?

Luna is very Aligned with Khorne? Isnt she?
Also Taylor, did create a Pseudo Astartes Armor o one of the Adeptas Sororitas?
3/12 c39 Geek-God of Speed
I just reread this fic and it reminded me why i love it, but also reminded me about something that peeves me. If you ever do a rewrite please fix the dialogue that happens whenever “worm” plot is happening, something will be brought up like the cauldron vials everbody will be shocked and than two chapters later it gets brought up again and reacted to as if it was the first time. Everything else is almost perfect and then there’ll be a paragraph or two that feels like its not supposed to be there
I just reread this fic and it reminded me why i love it, but also reminded me about something that peeves me. If you ever do a rewrite please fix the dialogue that happens whenever “worm” plot is happening, something will be brought up like the cauldron vials everbody will be shocked and than two chapters later it gets brought up again and reacted to as if it was the first time. Everything else is almost perfect and then there’ll be a paragraph or two that feels like its not supposed to be there
2/26 c1 arianamax177
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Your story "Empress Ascendant" has the power to captivate, let’s bring it to life!
As a commissioned artist with 4 years of experience, I specialize in turning stories into dynamic visuals, whether it’s a graphic novel, action-packed manga, or a beautifully illustrated webcomic.
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2/5 c1 Guest
i suppose for what it is the writing is alright but i hate the hand-holding style with a constant companion constantly giving dull input. so for that ill have to stop on chapter 1 because i just cringe endlessly reading this style. but thats just like my opinion, my preference.
good luck on your writing!
i suppose for what it is the writing is alright but i hate the hand-holding style with a constant companion constantly giving dull input. so for that ill have to stop on chapter 1 because i just cringe endlessly reading this style. but thats just like my opinion, my preference.
good luck on your writing!
1/27 c45 Guest
The only prayer that counts is health and wellness and plenty and prosperity for all humanity for all sentient life
The only prayer that counts is health and wellness and plenty and prosperity for all humanity for all sentient life
1/29 c33 leebrough98us
yea I'm confused about the hatred I thought they had been getting along ok at first or I'm thinking of another fic... so many i like and i hate it when all of y'all upload at the same time cause then i finesh all of em in one day
yea I'm confused about the hatred I thought they had been getting along ok at first or I'm thinking of another fic... so many i like and i hate it when all of y'all upload at the same time cause then i finesh all of em in one day
1/26 c45 Imperial FIsh
Poor Luna team, everyone can die. But what is the point of the fallen attacking a peaceful object?
Poor Luna team, everyone can die. But what is the point of the fallen attacking a peaceful object?