for Third Life5/15 c35 Shiva Hayabusa
so far this story is extremely catching, i read it all in a single night and truly hope you continue this story... it is just so well written and the story is so catching that i cant wait to see where you take it
so far this story is extremely catching, i read it all in a single night and truly hope you continue this story... it is just so well written and the story is so catching that i cant wait to see where you take it
2/24 c15 
9Jazzilynn Hall
Um... Kronos is the Titan of Time, is he not? Could he not have caught a glimpse of horses in the future?
9Jazzilynn HallUm... Kronos is the Titan of Time, is he not? Could he not have caught a glimpse of horses in the future?
1/20 c1 Phantom-Riot
Hi there! I hope I'm not causing any inconvenience, but I recently read "Third Life" and I genuinely enjoyed it. I've been thinking about adapting your story into my comic style, and I would be thrilled to bring it to life in that format. I believe you'll be happy with the results and might even consider sharing it once it's complete. I'm a skilled digital artist with professional experience, and I offer paid services for my work. I don't work for free, but I assure you the quality will be worth it. We can discuss pricing and other details further.
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Hi there! I hope I'm not causing any inconvenience, but I recently read "Third Life" and I genuinely enjoyed it. I've been thinking about adapting your story into my comic style, and I would be thrilled to bring it to life in that format. I believe you'll be happy with the results and might even consider sharing it once it's complete. I'm a skilled digital artist with professional experience, and I offer paid services for my work. I don't work for free, but I assure you the quality will be worth it. We can discuss pricing and other details further.
You can contact me here:
Discord: echoknight.01
Instagram: phantom_riot
Twitter: Phantom_Riot
Email:
1/4 c35 Guest
Update plz! this story is amazing!
Update plz! this story is amazing!
1/4 c32 Guest
RIP number 15, a loony-tunes worthy death. It made me chuckle when I read it.
I love this story! It's amazing!
RIP number 15, a loony-tunes worthy death. It made me chuckle when I read it.
I love this story! It's amazing!
11/14/2024 c8 d.mckinney1014
Roosevelt Field mall isnt near the camp. Its in Garden City/Westbury Nassau County on Long Island. Camp Half Blood is near montauk new york way at the other end of the island 96 miles away. I should know cause i go to roosevelt field all the time
Roosevelt Field mall isnt near the camp. Its in Garden City/Westbury Nassau County on Long Island. Camp Half Blood is near montauk new york way at the other end of the island 96 miles away. I should know cause i go to roosevelt field all the time
9/28/2024 c2 naedinefebruary2.0
Wassup,
Having read your absorbing Story, Third Life, I found many things to admire in the weighty narrative and imaginative flair. Your storytelling is truly remarkable, and I really do think that it can reach a wider audience as a comic. I'm a commission artist with broad experience in converting literature into striking comic format. I will be proud to reformat your story into this dynamic format. Let me just take you through some of my portfolio samples of previous works. Your literature is a masterpiece, and as goes the proverb, A comic can capture the essence of the story, so that would add more power to your literature. I look forward to the possibility of working together. As I am open to commission I'd really appreciate that if you could commission me for this. Do message me on discord or twitter with your story name.
Here is my Contacts
discord : naedinefebruary
Twitter : naedinefebruary
Hope to hear back from you soon.
Wassup,
Having read your absorbing Story, Third Life, I found many things to admire in the weighty narrative and imaginative flair. Your storytelling is truly remarkable, and I really do think that it can reach a wider audience as a comic. I'm a commission artist with broad experience in converting literature into striking comic format. I will be proud to reformat your story into this dynamic format. Let me just take you through some of my portfolio samples of previous works. Your literature is a masterpiece, and as goes the proverb, A comic can capture the essence of the story, so that would add more power to your literature. I look forward to the possibility of working together. As I am open to commission I'd really appreciate that if you could commission me for this. Do message me on discord or twitter with your story name.
Here is my Contacts
discord : naedinefebruary
Twitter : naedinefebruary
Hope to hear back from you soon.
9/5/2024 c33 Wwolko
I dont know how i didn’t realize this when it was first mentioned but, holy shit nico and bianca are part of the di savoia family, aka the italian royal family, definitely an interesting idea, cant wait to see where that goes
I dont know how i didn’t realize this when it was first mentioned but, holy shit nico and bianca are part of the di savoia family, aka the italian royal family, definitely an interesting idea, cant wait to see where that goes
9/3/2024 c35 VeronicaD13
Okay I'm really glad that I stuck with this because aside from chapter 3 this story is amazing! I'm loving the whole family dynamics going on and how you've avoided so many potential pitfalls in this story while still keeping everything on track! Kinda sad that Bianca isn't also a witch but I guess that happens in muggleborn families? I absolutely love Chrysa's dedication to all of the iterations of her family and jobs and can't wait to see how Nico is going to deal with everything and what he'll do when he ultimately gets found out. Hopefully Bianca is still getting attention from her mom and not just Melinoe bc I'm honestly not sure what's going on with that situation.
Can't wait for more!
Okay I'm really glad that I stuck with this because aside from chapter 3 this story is amazing! I'm loving the whole family dynamics going on and how you've avoided so many potential pitfalls in this story while still keeping everything on track! Kinda sad that Bianca isn't also a witch but I guess that happens in muggleborn families? I absolutely love Chrysa's dedication to all of the iterations of her family and jobs and can't wait to see how Nico is going to deal with everything and what he'll do when he ultimately gets found out. Hopefully Bianca is still getting attention from her mom and not just Melinoe bc I'm honestly not sure what's going on with that situation.
Can't wait for more!
9/2/2024 c3 VeronicaD13
Ummm yeah. So you need warnings like all over this chapter. And her power protects her from what exactly? Hands feet and other objects but not other appendages? And why didn't she go to Pomphrey or and adult if she wasn't obliviated, not to mention kept going to detention? A WHOLE lot doesn't add up here. Not to mention that it's not necessary at all for this story development since she's obviously just fine after a year of being assaulted and not pregnant or kicked out by Petunia. What, did she just lie back and think of England?
Ummm yeah. So you need warnings like all over this chapter. And her power protects her from what exactly? Hands feet and other objects but not other appendages? And why didn't she go to Pomphrey or and adult if she wasn't obliviated, not to mention kept going to detention? A WHOLE lot doesn't add up here. Not to mention that it's not necessary at all for this story development since she's obviously just fine after a year of being assaulted and not pregnant or kicked out by Petunia. What, did she just lie back and think of England?