9/24/2020 c1 4Azure Overlord
Hey me again I saw on your profile your looking for a beta Im bored & Im free so if you want I'm available also check your pms
Hey me again I saw on your profile your looking for a beta Im bored & Im free so if you want I'm available also check your pms
6/28/2018 c1 Guest
Gee you sure are taking your time
Gee you sure are taking your time
7/16/2017 c2 Guest
Holy shit, the Gary Stu'ness and your laziness are terrible. Pacing is shit, quality is shit, you are shit. Kys.
Holy shit, the Gary Stu'ness and your laziness are terrible. Pacing is shit, quality is shit, you are shit. Kys.
7/15/2017 c4 Guest
PLEASE GET BACK TO THIS FANFIC VERY SOON! It's AWESOME I NEED to read MORE on this! So PLEASE UPDATE & put up another chapter VERY SOON!
PLEASE GET BACK TO THIS FANFIC VERY SOON! It's AWESOME I NEED to read MORE on this! So PLEASE UPDATE & put up another chapter VERY SOON!
7/11/2017 c4 6Mr.unknow
can we get to the story already, too many update or important message to read in any story i find, its getting annoying.
can we get to the story already, too many update or important message to read in any story i find, its getting annoying.
6/21/2017 c1 Guest
Just a recommendation; you shouldn't use a "what if" description. Ever.
Just a recommendation; you shouldn't use a "what if" description. Ever.
6/17/2017 c1 2TheSenate'sGoodSoldier
Please Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please do more! ill get down on my knees and beg for your work to continue!
Please Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please do more! ill get down on my knees and beg for your work to continue!
6/11/2017 c3 Guest
PLEASE UPDATE AND PUT UP ANOTHER CHAPTER! This fanfic is really good and I just want to read this one to it's end! PLEASE PUT UP ANOTHER CHAPTER VERY SOON!
PLEASE UPDATE AND PUT UP ANOTHER CHAPTER! This fanfic is really good and I just want to read this one to it's end! PLEASE PUT UP ANOTHER CHAPTER VERY SOON!
6/10/2017 c4 Guest
PLEASE UPDATE! THIS is a great fanfic PLEASE UPDATE IT!
PLEASE UPDATE! THIS is a great fanfic PLEASE UPDATE IT!
6/10/2017 c4 Guest
i think this is a great story sadly this site wont let me logon at all
i think this is a great story sadly this site wont let me logon at all