4/10/2001 c2 Unknown
ok,i guess?anyways,it HAS to be...no clue,the maid?maybe not,its NEVER the obvious one,so it has to be her ^_^
ok,i guess?anyways,it HAS to be...no clue,the maid?maybe not,its NEVER the obvious one,so it has to be her ^_^
11/29/2000 c1 Lady Valtaya
Man you make Veggie old when he gets taken by Frieza! In all of my stories he's about five! Still, I like this you have a good start here, keep going! I especially like the very end.
Man you make Veggie old when he gets taken by Frieza! In all of my stories he's about five! Still, I like this you have a good start here, keep going! I especially like the very end.
11/28/2000 c1 Ineptitude
Ooh ooh keep going, I like it a lot, two thumbs up! Four stars * * * *! A ff.n smash, ok I killed it, hee hee
Ooh ooh keep going, I like it a lot, two thumbs up! Four stars * * * *! A ff.n smash, ok I killed it, hee hee
11/28/2000 c1 Marau-chan
*sniff* It would be so awesome if it was Bulma, but of course I'm not here to tell you what to write. You see, I'm a huge sap when it comes to B/V get togethers... *sigh*... *blink blink* uh... Okay... now I'm getting all dreamy. Sorry ^_^()! I really like your writing style! It is very fluent and flows together well. Anyways, as usual, I'm telling you to email me! If you'd like, I'll send some of my fics I've written to you... but, you see, no ones really read them before so it would be a once in a lifetime experience. Of course,they are B/V fics! Hope to hear from you soon!
Marau-chan^_^
*sniff* It would be so awesome if it was Bulma, but of course I'm not here to tell you what to write. You see, I'm a huge sap when it comes to B/V get togethers... *sigh*... *blink blink* uh... Okay... now I'm getting all dreamy. Sorry ^_^()! I really like your writing style! It is very fluent and flows together well. Anyways, as usual, I'm telling you to email me! If you'd like, I'll send some of my fics I've written to you... but, you see, no ones really read them before so it would be a once in a lifetime experience. Of course,they are B/V fics! Hope to hear from you soon!
Marau-chan^_^
11/28/2000 c1 Marau-chan
Okay, this is an awesome beginning to... I don't know. I have no idea where this fic is going but that's a GOOD thing! Suprises are always awesome. Anyway, I'm about to go on to the next part of this fic and read it. You'll here from me then too! Bwahahahahahaha! *cough* okay... write more and email me!
Thanks ^_^
Okay, this is an awesome beginning to... I don't know. I have no idea where this fic is going but that's a GOOD thing! Suprises are always awesome. Anyway, I'm about to go on to the next part of this fic and read it. You'll here from me then too! Bwahahahahahaha! *cough* okay... write more and email me!
Thanks ^_^
11/28/2000 c1 2Zen
Hmm...I forgive the typos! (I make enough of them myself!) But at the end you mention a function (?) Care to enlighten me?
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Hmm...I forgive the typos! (I make enough of them myself!) But at the end you mention a function (?) Care to enlighten me?
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11/28/2000 c1 Coofoo
That was pretty damn good. I loved the way you put the sentences together, impressive. ^-^
That was pretty damn good. I loved the way you put the sentences together, impressive. ^-^
11/28/2000 c1 23Gohanzgirl
hey well for my second fanfic i hoped ya like it and any hew i just wanted to see what people said i cant figure out how to look at my reviews without submitting one my self if there is a way could some one tell me?
hey well for my second fanfic i hoped ya like it and any hew i just wanted to see what people said i cant figure out how to look at my reviews without submitting one my self if there is a way could some one tell me?
11/28/2000 c1 8ashess
very graphic and i like that, but you really, really have to watch your spelling!
siloheett silhouette
ransome randsome
weght weight, etc.
very graphic and i like that, but you really, really have to watch your spelling!
siloheett silhouette
ransome randsome
weght weight, etc.
11/28/2000 c1 sandy
wow I thought I liked the other one but this one is really great much better holds your instrest more. I think you can visulize this story better than the other one
wow I thought I liked the other one but this one is really great much better holds your instrest more. I think you can visulize this story better than the other one