2/19 c63 Lisa-Katagiri
Hi there
How are you? I hope I’m not causing any inconvenience. I recently read your story "A Shattered Vale" and genuinely enjoyed it. I’ve been thinking about turning it into a comic in my style, and I believe it would be an exciting commission project. I'm confident you would also be pleased with the results and might even consider sharing it.

As an experienced digital artist, I am currently open for commissions, and I would love to adapt your wonderful story into a comic format. If you're interested in commissioning me for this project, we can discuss the details further either in the general chat or on Discord.

My Discord is lisakatagiri,

and I’d be happy to chat about pricing, timelines, and how we can bring your story to life in a visually engaging way.

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Thank you!

1/26 c63 17WwEpsilonwW
Kamijou unintentionaliy complimenting Blake’s mom is amazing. We love to see it. Accelerator literally strolling into a military base too.

1/20 c63 Guest
DARK! UPDATE A CERTAIN ELECTRIC TRAINER AND MY LIFE IS YOURS!

1/18 c63 8jdog2k1
Ok so Ruby is depressed for obvious reasons, a far cry from the normally optimistic girl

Touma just scored a big win with Blake’s mom for that sister comment so she is already approving, boy i can’t wait till he meets Ghira

Accelerator just doing what he wants when he wants as he normally does without fear of consequence, im just waiting for him to make an ant out of Jacques Schnee in front of Weiss

1/17 c63 Guest
Accelerator's part was funny I loved it

1/15 c63 2a54321
Roman remains fun as always and freaking LOVE Accelerator just baring into Atlas making it very clear that he will go where he wants (Nora's opinion on it was very fun XD).

1/14 c63 3craytherlay
Another fairly solid chapter, of course, there are the usual hiccups, but to be fair, I never gave you much reason to listen to me before. And I hope to correct that, even if my words remain unheard, as it's only polite to show my appreciation of your story by reviewing it.

Starting off strong, we get to see the immediate aftermath of the battle of Beacon with Ruby being omega level depressed. Her and Yang chatting with the two of them discussing the recent events, nothing too detailed of course. They're still mostly in the dark about a lot of things going on, but enough to get them thinking. It only makes sense Yang would be worrying over blake, so Ruby, sweet as ever, taking her mind off it is in charcter.

Them visiting JNPR was a nice touch, with them noting how Accel's flew the coop quite literally. Granted, I think he'd have done that regardless of if Weiss was in a relationship with him. He'd smell the overbearing, gaslghting horrid controlling racist father figure from a mile away. And know that Weiss, as a friend, needs to be rescued from that shiz hole as soon as possible. Of course, he wouldn't be worried about Touma as Touma's suffered through way worse anyways.

The next scene, although sweet, I do feel you're still forcing the whole 'romance' aspect with Touma. He'd be more concerned with getting home anyways, but It's not impossible for him to be latching onto affection shown to him. He needs all the kindness he can get when he's stranded in another universe without his anchor.

However, and I do apologize, as you always hate when I point out when something is OOC. Touma... willing chooses to cook for index, so he's never been ordered around like a slave. Remember, this is the dude, who literally suffered through hundreds of billions of years worth of suffering. And only broke, when he was shown a world where Index was happy without him. Yes, theres no clear indication he's inlove with her, but he sure as hell doesn't see her as chore, same with Othinus, but I won't go into that.

Back onto the positives, I do like the banter between the four, as of course Touma would be getting teased by Neo, Blake (And) Roman all at the same time. And Seeing his reaction to Blake being a rich girl (cheiftain's daughter), was of course, fairly amusing. Of course, he's Touma so he tries to justify it, but the fact remains this is like the... what number? Girl he's run into and gotten close with that happens to be of high standing? XD.

Finally, we got Accelerator, one man armying his way through the place that gets discount Godzilla's in the actual show later. I do like the practical approach you have accelerator use, its in line with his character and I can appreciate that. Of course, I also do appreciate you acknowledging that the militaristic nature of Atlas as a concept is flawed. And displaying that through the arrogant mindset of them trying to mess with things they don't understand.

Of course Ironwood, who actually knows what Accelerator is capable of, would know better than to try and get in the way... at the moment. But something tells me that Ironwood is simply preparing something to try (and fail) to trap accelerator. After all, he believes Accel's ability is a semblence, and would have his scientists working round the clock for a counter measure. So they'll be in for a surprise once they discover that Accel's ability has nothing to do with aura.

Anyways, I do hope, despite my shitty behavior in the discord, and failure to express myself without coming off offensive. That, you are doing well Dark, as much as I disagree with you, I enjoy your work, and I will continue showing my appreciation.

I look forward to your next chapter.