for Goku the Gamer (Old Version)12/9/2024 c1 ZoyeZest
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Hey there! I hope you're doing great!
I just finished reading your story Goku the Gamer (Old Version), and I absolutely loved it! I'd be thrilled to adapt it into my comic style or even animation. I'd work on it as a commission, and I think you'd really enjoy the final result something you might even want to share!
I'm a digital artist open for commissions and have a few spots available. I work on various types of artwork, my rates are reasonable, and I always deliver high-quality pieces. If you're interested, let’s discuss it further!
You can reach me here:
- Discord: baran59354
- DeviantArt: baran59354
- Twitter: ZoyeZest
- Instagram: baran59354
Looking forward to hearing from you!
7/5/2022 c2 
6Primus2021
I apparently already left a review for chapter 1, but I don't remember what it was so I'm going to leave this here because I spent 5 minutes on it and thought it would be a waist of time spent if I didn't post it here anyways...
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Chapter 1. 2nd review!
I think I'd have done something else, starting off with something similar to Fallouts S.P.E.C.I.A.L. i.e.
S: Strength.
P: Perception.
E: Endurance.
C: Charisma.
I: Intelligence.
A: Agility.
L: Luck.
For the HP, KP, & MP equation formula... ... ...
(Endurance [Vitality] plus Charisma [Charm] plus Luck) x 20 equals Health Points.
(Strength plus Agility [Dexterity] plus Luck) x 20 equals Ki Points.
(Perception [Wisdom] plus Intelligence plus Luck) x 20 equals Mana Points.
This way, ALL of the Stats matter, not just one or two to increase the overall power. Although it does explain why Yamcha and Krillen are always dying, lol, low charisma, endurance and luck, sucks to be them, LMAO!
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Using Level 26 Goku's 130 SP. As the basis for this formula ... ... ...
(E: 35 plus C: 5 plus L: 5) x 20 equals HP: 2500.
(S: 45 plus A: 30 plus L: 5) x 20 equals KP: 1600. Not yet Over 9000, lol.
(I: 5 plus P: 5 plus L: 5) x 20 equals MP: 400.
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Using Level 10 Bulma's 50 SP. As a basis for this formula...
... ... ...
(S: 2 plus A: 2 plus L: 2) x 20 equals HP: 120.
(E: 2 plus C: 10 plus L: 2) x 20 equals KP: 240. Wow! That's higher than I thought it was going to be, lol.
(I: 25 plus P: 7 plus L: 2) x 20 equals MP: 680.
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6Primus2021I apparently already left a review for chapter 1, but I don't remember what it was so I'm going to leave this here because I spent 5 minutes on it and thought it would be a waist of time spent if I didn't post it here anyways...
... ... ...
Chapter 1. 2nd review!
I think I'd have done something else, starting off with something similar to Fallouts S.P.E.C.I.A.L. i.e.
S: Strength.
P: Perception.
E: Endurance.
C: Charisma.
I: Intelligence.
A: Agility.
L: Luck.
For the HP, KP, & MP equation formula... ... ...
(Endurance [Vitality] plus Charisma [Charm] plus Luck) x 20 equals Health Points.
(Strength plus Agility [Dexterity] plus Luck) x 20 equals Ki Points.
(Perception [Wisdom] plus Intelligence plus Luck) x 20 equals Mana Points.
This way, ALL of the Stats matter, not just one or two to increase the overall power. Although it does explain why Yamcha and Krillen are always dying, lol, low charisma, endurance and luck, sucks to be them, LMAO!
~
... ... ...
Using Level 26 Goku's 130 SP. As the basis for this formula ... ... ...
(E: 35 plus C: 5 plus L: 5) x 20 equals HP: 2500.
(S: 45 plus A: 30 plus L: 5) x 20 equals KP: 1600. Not yet Over 9000, lol.
(I: 5 plus P: 5 plus L: 5) x 20 equals MP: 400.
~
... ... ...
Using Level 10 Bulma's 50 SP. As a basis for this formula...
... ... ...
(S: 2 plus A: 2 plus L: 2) x 20 equals HP: 120.
(E: 2 plus C: 10 plus L: 2) x 20 equals KP: 240. Wow! That's higher than I thought it was going to be, lol.
(I: 25 plus P: 7 plus L: 2) x 20 equals MP: 680.
~
11/15/2021 c4 Jmechan24
Noo bulma, would have been better to first spend the 5 stats points, well it was to late when the system announced it, next time it's possible to do that using points gained with se Kai boost, they need a gravity chamber
Noo bulma, would have been better to first spend the 5 stats points, well it was to late when the system announced it, next time it's possible to do that using points gained with se Kai boost, they need a gravity chamber
11/11/2021 c7 CDBB123
Ahh that was great! I haven't read the other version yet but hope u update this masterpiece if u have the time.
Ahh that was great! I haven't read the other version yet but hope u update this masterpiece if u have the time.
1/31/2021 c1 lol
Reading this story was AWESOME! thank you for all the work you put into this because it radiates joy of from it to others... This story was amazing keep it up!
Reading this story was AWESOME! thank you for all the work you put into this because it radiates joy of from it to others... This story was amazing keep it up!
7/22/2020 c6 Scissors Dolphin
Eyeroll at this Akane. Hilariously traumatic backstory obviously generically pretty, innocent, abused, and fetishized female harem member. I might as well have been reading a "How NOT to write a fanfiction OC" .
Eyeroll at this Akane. Hilariously traumatic backstory obviously generically pretty, innocent, abused, and fetishized female harem member. I might as well have been reading a "How NOT to write a fanfiction OC" .
7/21/2020 c2 Scissors Dolphin
You got to work on your punctuation a bit. You are missing a lot of commas.
You got to work on your punctuation a bit. You are missing a lot of commas.
4/25/2020 c1 2MrRockingHippie
So far so good. Was a little jarring with the author note in the middle. In my oppinion you could have left that out and instead have a few short lines of a summary what happened (i do agree those part aren't necessarily needed)
Also love the idea that Bulma gets involved and use the system :)
Only real hangup is that you seemed to go over the scene where she discover that her panties are missing. Could have been a funny scene when she noticed :D
2MrRockingHippieSo far so good. Was a little jarring with the author note in the middle. In my oppinion you could have left that out and instead have a few short lines of a summary what happened (i do agree those part aren't necessarily needed)
Also love the idea that Bulma gets involved and use the system :)
Only real hangup is that you seemed to go over the scene where she discover that her panties are missing. Could have been a funny scene when she noticed :D
2/1/2020 c7 Jekke604
Nice story,
I like the OC
I like how Bulma can progress from a self centered princess to a nice person. Though there is still a ways to go.
Love how Goku gets smarter but be carefull not to overdo it.
As of writing this review it's been more than a year since the last posting.
I hope you'll continue this story soon.
Grts Jekke604
Nice story,
I like the OC
I like how Bulma can progress from a self centered princess to a nice person. Though there is still a ways to go.
Love how Goku gets smarter but be carefull not to overdo it.
As of writing this review it's been more than a year since the last posting.
I hope you'll continue this story soon.
Grts Jekke604
12/10/2019 c1 Blade of the Drakoniants
I had hoped that in the year and a half to two years it's been since I hit chapter 6 that this author would've stuck to his word and actually continued this story but seeing as how he hasn't I wouldn't recommend reading anything else he makes unless it's actually meant to be a one shot. He can't seem to actually stick to his word about coming back to things.
I had hoped that in the year and a half to two years it's been since I hit chapter 6 that this author would've stuck to his word and actually continued this story but seeing as how he hasn't I wouldn't recommend reading anything else he makes unless it's actually meant to be a one shot. He can't seem to actually stick to his word about coming back to things.
11/24/2019 c1 1HeavenShakingPalm9
Be gentle because it's your first time?
Is this an ecchi anime now?
1HeavenShakingPalm9Be gentle because it's your first time?
Is this an ecchi anime now?
7/12/2019 c7 7era-romance
for all that she's in character, really hate bulma. that's Dumbledore level manipulation right there
hope there's a sequel...guess I'll need to check out your other stories
7era-romancefor all that she's in character, really hate bulma. that's Dumbledore level manipulation right there
hope there's a sequel...guess I'll need to check out your other stories
7/5/2019 c2 xXxoscartolaxxx
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