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1/31 c1 lol
Reading this story was AWESOME! thank you for all the work you put into this because it radiates joy of from it to others... This story was amazing keep it up!
7/22/2020 c6 Scissors Dolphin
Eyeroll at this Akane. Hilariously traumatic backstory obviously generically pretty, innocent, abused, and fetishized female harem member. I might as well have been reading a "How NOT to write a fanfiction OC" .
7/21/2020 c4 Scissors Dolphin
WTF? Why would you include this in a DB fanfic?
7/21/2020 c2 Scissors Dolphin
You got to work on your punctuation a bit. You are missing a lot of commas.
4/25/2020 c1 2MrRockingHippie
So far so good. Was a little jarring with the author note in the middle. In my oppinion you could have left that out and instead have a few short lines of a summary what happened (i do agree those part aren't necessarily needed)
Also love the idea that Bulma gets involved and use the system :)
Only real hangup is that you seemed to go over the scene where she discover that her panties are missing. Could have been a funny scene when she noticed :D
2/1/2020 c7 Jekke604
Nice story,

I like the OC

I like how Bulma can progress from a self centered princess to a nice person. Though there is still a ways to go.

Love how Goku gets smarter but be carefull not to overdo it.

As of writing this review it's been more than a year since the last posting.
I hope you'll continue this story soon.

Grts Jekke604
12/10/2019 c1 Blade of the Drakoniants
I had hoped that in the year and a half to two years it's been since I hit chapter 6 that this author would've stuck to his word and actually continued this story but seeing as how he hasn't I wouldn't recommend reading anything else he makes unless it's actually meant to be a one shot. He can't seem to actually stick to his word about coming back to things.
11/24/2019 c1 1HeavenShakingPalm9
Be gentle because it's your first time?

Is this an ecchi anime now?
8/25/2019 c1 RandomIsGood
If goku wasn't goku he would have died because of bulma
7/12/2019 c7 6era-romance
for all that she's in character, really hate bulma. that's Dumbledore level manipulation right there
hope there's a sequel...guess I'll need to check out your other stories
7/5/2019 c2 xXxoscartolaxxx
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6/2/2019 c2 Reisi2
Havent read everything yet but till now its awesome
5/23/2019 c7 look2019
Good Chapter!
5/17/2019 c7 4Shadow S. Korosu
This is very different from what I initially expected, and it's the only Gamer Goku story that I've seen so far. I'm really enjoying it, though I'm a bit surprised at just how negative Bulma is being. I have to admit that I've never really watched the original Dragon Ball, though, I've only seen a a few bits and pieces, so I can't say for sure if she was actually that way canonically.

Either way, I've really liked it so far, and I hope that it ends up getting updated soon, after the year delay that it's had.
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