for The Undesired Second Chance4/21 c8 Mr Penis
From my understanding kunai were actually used for things like digging or as a makeshift foothold for difficult climbing
From my understanding kunai were actually used for things like digging or as a makeshift foothold for difficult climbing
3/17 c51 
1bleachorange
The plot is quite intriguing. I do think the pacing sometimes had me frustrated as a reader, but overall its a good read. I would say to anyone considering this, its worth your time.
1bleachorangeThe plot is quite intriguing. I do think the pacing sometimes had me frustrated as a reader, but overall its a good read. I would say to anyone considering this, its worth your time.
3/17 c9 bleachorange
It does feel a bit odd minato rolls up and asks a random civvie for help with a seal.
It does feel a bit odd minato rolls up and asks a random civvie for help with a seal.
3/16 c6 bleachorange
Whew! I like the idea, but the pacing is way too slow thus far. I feel like a lot of this could have been summarized or bypassed. Is this supposed to be a slice of life?
Whew! I like the idea, but the pacing is way too slow thus far. I feel like a lot of this could have been summarized or bypassed. Is this supposed to be a slice of life?
2/1 c1 Dr. Douglas
"A second chance? But I didn't even finish my first one! This one is just undesirable!"
"It's time to turn this Undesired second chance into something desirable."
"This was truly my undesired second chance."
I'm so sorry but I got hit with that Lobotomy kaisen.
"A second chance? But I didn't even finish my first one! This one is just undesirable!"
"It's time to turn this Undesired second chance into something desirable."
"This was truly my undesired second chance."
I'm so sorry but I got hit with that Lobotomy kaisen.
1/20 c1 Frostbound Reverie
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1/19 c1 SilentOmen0
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1/14 c51 InoSaku
Happy New Year!
Happy New Year!
1/8 c1 billsazguard
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1/7 c35 7TheLandMaster45
You know, I just realized this when re-reading the fic:
Did Akaiko just commit trans-dimensional homicide?
Did she just stab some poor German salaryman who probably had just gotten a promotion and was on his way back home to his wife and kids with a senbon thrown across dimensions?
7TheLandMaster45You know, I just realized this when re-reading the fic:
Did Akaiko just commit trans-dimensional homicide?
Did she just stab some poor German salaryman who probably had just gotten a promotion and was on his way back home to his wife and kids with a senbon thrown across dimensions?
1/5 c39 bdydvl
Why make shizune a couple years older? She's the same age as Kakashi
Orochimaru should find shin soon since that's how he made danzo's arm(when danzo get it is another matter)
Why make shizune a couple years older? She's the same age as Kakashi
Orochimaru should find shin soon since that's how he made danzo's arm(when danzo get it is another matter)
1/5 c38 bdydvl
Is this moron thinking of asking Tsunade to help research her grandfather body and how it could be grafted on childrens? Has he lost his mind?
Is this moron thinking of asking Tsunade to help research her grandfather body and how it could be grafted on childrens? Has he lost his mind?
1/5 c32 bdydvl
Why tf would Root(probably) act now? Unless the mission was kidnapping mc (stupid with his connections still in the village) this encounter was dumb
Why tf would Root(probably) act now? Unless the mission was kidnapping mc (stupid with his connections still in the village) this encounter was dumb