
5/20 c1 Albionia
Outstanding. I believe that in the First Gulf War we () lost no one to the Iraqis but several to the Americans. Our forces were afraid of the US, not the Iraqis!
Outstanding. I believe that in the First Gulf War we () lost no one to the Iraqis but several to the Americans. Our forces were afraid of the US, not the Iraqis!
11/27/2022 c1 bigmac2759
Great story. Thanks.
Good luck in the military. I hope you eventually have the opportunity to return to writing.
Great story. Thanks.
Good luck in the military. I hope you eventually have the opportunity to return to writing.
8/10/2017 c1 IAFGuest
For security reasons cannot give real name or have account here. Due to those incidents with the Americans anti-air missile problems, we at the IAF have standing orders to kill any american anti-fighter missile systems if they lock onto any IAF aircraft.
For security reasons cannot give real name or have account here. Due to those incidents with the Americans anti-air missile problems, we at the IAF have standing orders to kill any american anti-fighter missile systems if they lock onto any IAF aircraft.
6/26/2017 c1 Guest
"SVPPB is now pretty much abandoned while I focus on other stuff."
Noooooooooooooo [insert Darth Vader video]. A bit over the top maybe, but that was one of the stories I had been looking forward to the most back when you started it, so I'm definitely sad to hear that. But, I guess looking at your recent activity realistically, you haven't had much time to finish even those stories you didn't imply were being abandoned and looking into the future, it doesn't seem like you'll have any time then either.
I definitely wish you the best for your future, whether that is you looking for a good career or starting a family. In terms of fanfiction, I'll probably be dead by the time you'll be able to finish any one of the others, I'm afraid ;) That's something you learn to accept when reading fanfiction!
"SVPPB is now pretty much abandoned while I focus on other stuff."
Noooooooooooooo [insert Darth Vader video]. A bit over the top maybe, but that was one of the stories I had been looking forward to the most back when you started it, so I'm definitely sad to hear that. But, I guess looking at your recent activity realistically, you haven't had much time to finish even those stories you didn't imply were being abandoned and looking into the future, it doesn't seem like you'll have any time then either.
I definitely wish you the best for your future, whether that is you looking for a good career or starting a family. In terms of fanfiction, I'll probably be dead by the time you'll be able to finish any one of the others, I'm afraid ;) That's something you learn to accept when reading fanfiction!
6/20/2017 c1
1Ace of Hate
Glad to see that you're still alive, man! Been waiting for both the final chapter of Khaveyrim and the re-boot of it as well, since It is one of the better NCIS/HP xovers around.

Glad to see that you're still alive, man! Been waiting for both the final chapter of Khaveyrim and the re-boot of it as well, since It is one of the better NCIS/HP xovers around.
6/7/2017 c1 Ruth L
This story/your writing are the reason I read fanfiction. Everyone once in a while a story likes this comes along and it is entertaining, informative and just simply broadens a person's horizons. Thank you for sharing your talents!
This story/your writing are the reason I read fanfiction. Everyone once in a while a story likes this comes along and it is entertaining, informative and just simply broadens a person's horizons. Thank you for sharing your talents!
6/8/2017 c1 Kaemon Manzo
Great story and I love how authentic your stories try to be from a military perspective. I served in the US Army myself so sometimes even when I find a good story that just messes up military stuff so badly it becomes unreadable to me. Your stories on the other hand are fantastic, well thought out, and actually make sense from a military perspective (or at least if there are things that don't make sense it is much closer to T.V.'s version of military stuff where things just happen quicker). Thanks again for keeping up with all of your writing, and best of luck with your educational goals and your military goals. I hope you make it.
Great story and I love how authentic your stories try to be from a military perspective. I served in the US Army myself so sometimes even when I find a good story that just messes up military stuff so badly it becomes unreadable to me. Your stories on the other hand are fantastic, well thought out, and actually make sense from a military perspective (or at least if there are things that don't make sense it is much closer to T.V.'s version of military stuff where things just happen quicker). Thanks again for keeping up with all of your writing, and best of luck with your educational goals and your military goals. I hope you make it.
5/28/2017 c1 Macilnar
This was interesting but I have to say the A/N was the most exciting part for me as other than "Life in Binary", which hasn't updated in years, and Per Ardua there aren't many SGA/HP crossovers that I enjoy.
This was interesting but I have to say the A/N was the most exciting part for me as other than "Life in Binary", which hasn't updated in years, and Per Ardua there aren't many SGA/HP crossovers that I enjoy.
5/16/2017 c1 red demon161
Wow sound like your working very hard. As for the fic you did a pretty good job with it. It was a bit strange reading Carter as a rookie fighter pilot, when in 2003 she was a veteran Major on the cusp of promotion to Lt. Col.
I liked the Wild Weasel into. Carter couldn't have been a fighter pilot in the first Gulf War but I always imagined that line that she "logged over 100 hours in enemy airspace during the Gulf War" meant that she was working with Wild Weasel crews.
There were a few nitpicks. One was LBJ didn't lose the election, after his poor showing the primaries he chose not to seek reelection. Another was the war against the UIR, the 10th ACR was stationed in Israel not at Fort Irwin. A brigade of National Guardsmen were training with the 11th ACR at Fort Irwin.
I was really glad to see this fic. Not just because you updated but I have been on a fighter kick recently. I was on Wikipedia yesterday looking at planes, I always get ideas for fics so I research a little. You did a great job with this. It was different but done very well. I especially liked the part where they were low on fuel and trying to support troops at the same time then on top of that a sand storm is brewing and bunch of orphaned F-16s are trying to land. You could really feel the tension.
Wow sound like your working very hard. As for the fic you did a pretty good job with it. It was a bit strange reading Carter as a rookie fighter pilot, when in 2003 she was a veteran Major on the cusp of promotion to Lt. Col.
I liked the Wild Weasel into. Carter couldn't have been a fighter pilot in the first Gulf War but I always imagined that line that she "logged over 100 hours in enemy airspace during the Gulf War" meant that she was working with Wild Weasel crews.
There were a few nitpicks. One was LBJ didn't lose the election, after his poor showing the primaries he chose not to seek reelection. Another was the war against the UIR, the 10th ACR was stationed in Israel not at Fort Irwin. A brigade of National Guardsmen were training with the 11th ACR at Fort Irwin.
I was really glad to see this fic. Not just because you updated but I have been on a fighter kick recently. I was on Wikipedia yesterday looking at planes, I always get ideas for fics so I research a little. You did a great job with this. It was different but done very well. I especially liked the part where they were low on fuel and trying to support troops at the same time then on top of that a sand storm is brewing and bunch of orphaned F-16s are trying to land. You could really feel the tension.