for Soul Scars4/13/2021 c16 
1Selina Potter5
Do they not remember when harry ranted and said he couldn't get sleep because he saw them dead? When is the offer of seperate bed same room or cuddle together gonna come through
1Selina Potter5Do they not remember when harry ranted and said he couldn't get sleep because he saw them dead? When is the offer of seperate bed same room or cuddle together gonna come through
3/24/2021 c52 Liss
I adore this story and really hope that you update soon
I adore this story and really hope that you update soon
3/12/2021 c1 Bostonette
What the hell is wrong with writers? Is a spineless Harry when he’s with girls a requirement in these stories? Fucking ridiculous.
What the hell is wrong with writers? Is a spineless Harry when he’s with girls a requirement in these stories? Fucking ridiculous.
3/7/2021 c27 Seamarvel19
That whole thing with daphne not really being interested in men felt stupid and unnecessary we already know that they're already gonna end up together and that they wont get feelings for others I know it other people know it they're parents know it that felt extremely unnecessary and more like you just putting it in there for word count and it completely disregards the whole they will love each other equally and be equal ngl almost made me drop the story
That whole thing with daphne not really being interested in men felt stupid and unnecessary we already know that they're already gonna end up together and that they wont get feelings for others I know it other people know it they're parents know it that felt extremely unnecessary and more like you just putting it in there for word count and it completely disregards the whole they will love each other equally and be equal ngl almost made me drop the story
3/4/2021 c52 Sparkling Ratemis
The fluffiest of all cliff-hangers, to wait for the next chapter. Oh great and powerful rtn writer, please send us low readers a new chapter. I appreciate the explanation about hearing the others think,and intuitive communication. I got those mixed up in between and wondered that you might have forgotten those. Thank you for this story, I'll be waiting patiently.
The fluffiest of all cliff-hangers, to wait for the next chapter. Oh great and powerful rtn writer, please send us low readers a new chapter. I appreciate the explanation about hearing the others think,and intuitive communication. I got those mixed up in between and wondered that you might have forgotten those. Thank you for this story, I'll be waiting patiently.
3/4/2021 c50 Sparkling Ratemis
Sorry, I'm to stupid to control my phone... Well, anyway that was some great fluff! Really love the amount of work you still put into character development. I can't imagine where you want to go to, but I'm sure it will be great. Thank you so much for your story and I wish you all the best. I know, it has been a year since your last update, but one can still hope.
Sorry, I'm to stupid to control my phone... Well, anyway that was some great fluff! Really love the amount of work you still put into character development. I can't imagine where you want to go to, but I'm sure it will be great. Thank you so much for your story and I wish you all the best. I know, it has been a year since your last update, but one can still hope.
3/4/2021 c50 Sparkling Ratemis
Is this mature rating a thing I am to european to understand? :D No seriously, . that was
Is this mature rating a thing I am to european to understand? :D No seriously, . that was
3/4/2021 c45 Sparkling Ratemis
Ok, that hearth discussion is a bit weird for one that young. I get the point, it's a lovely one, but seriously that is a process of thought you'd expect from someone grown up, with the ability to reflect oneself. Still, you're the author, so that's you're idea of him and that's fine by me. I already love the story and won't stop. Thanks for your time, effort and heart you put on.
Ok, that hearth discussion is a bit weird for one that young. I get the point, it's a lovely one, but seriously that is a process of thought you'd expect from someone grown up, with the ability to reflect oneself. Still, you're the author, so that's you're idea of him and that's fine by me. I already love the story and won't stop. Thanks for your time, effort and heart you put on.
3/1/2021 c28 Sparkling Ratemis
Oh goody, this story is amazing. I really appreciate the depth, that you are giving the characters. Especially Daphne's past. Thank you so very much!
Oh goody, this story is amazing. I really appreciate the depth, that you are giving the characters. Especially Daphne's past. Thank you so very much!
2/24/2021 c4 Sparkling Ratemis
Oh god, this got dark fast. Seriously... how do children of that age know about suicide scars or ways to commit it by knife? *shudder* The wizarding world in canon really misses a god way to deal with mental trauma. No way you can deal with that on your own and come out alright... Any of them...
You might want to think about trigger warnings. Child abuse and suicide attempt are difficult topics.
Oh god, this got dark fast. Seriously... how do children of that age know about suicide scars or ways to commit it by knife? *shudder* The wizarding world in canon really misses a god way to deal with mental trauma. No way you can deal with that on your own and come out alright... Any of them...
You might want to think about trigger warnings. Child abuse and suicide attempt are difficult topics.
2/24/2021 c2 Sparkling Ratemis
Ok, this is getting to the point quickly. The girls more grown up, due to their knowledge of the bond and the scars, and Harry is more protective due to his horrible mistreatment. Makes kind of sense. Does it make sense to use his wand threateningly, when he neither knows how to use it that way, nor should have seen people using it that way? Obviously you are changing some more deatails, than you mentioned in the beginning. With Neville coming from a more reassured past (thanks for the heads up through the flashback) and therefore beeing able to make plans and go through with them (the toad) instead of just reacting to his environment. You also switched away from the boats. Not sure yet why.
Ok, this is getting to the point quickly. The girls more grown up, due to their knowledge of the bond and the scars, and Harry is more protective due to his horrible mistreatment. Makes kind of sense. Does it make sense to use his wand threateningly, when he neither knows how to use it that way, nor should have seen people using it that way? Obviously you are changing some more deatails, than you mentioned in the beginning. With Neville coming from a more reassured past (thanks for the heads up through the flashback) and therefore beeing able to make plans and go through with them (the toad) instead of just reacting to his environment. You also switched away from the boats. Not sure yet why.
2/24/2021 c1 Sparkling Ratemis
This is such a creative new take on soul bonds. The way you depict Hermione's POV is unique and wonderful. Even though I'm really wondering how the other girls are handling this situation. This situation must be unique in the wizarding world. So the old meddler should have heard about it and not just from Hermione...
This is such a creative new take on soul bonds. The way you depict Hermione's POV is unique and wonderful. Even though I'm really wondering how the other girls are handling this situation. This situation must be unique in the wizarding world. So the old meddler should have heard about it and not just from Hermione...
2/14/2021 c26 CrazyDuck744
Wow, this has got to be one of the more in depth and fleshed out fan fictions out there for HP. It certainly has many great points with the introduction of actual mental/physical issues for Harry with an actual systematic way of treatment with him not being miraculously cured in one month or something.
HOWEVER, this story overall, to me, feels really depressing. Also, while it is great that Harry is showing how he gets more power it seems like it is pointless. I am saying this because while what Harry experiences is different to novels and most fan fictions, the results are either the same or roughly the same. An example is how all the power Harry has does not do more than just make him look sexy and fight the same battles which are the same in canon and sometimes end with a worse off ending (First year troll fight).
Also Harry in some ways feels more like a side character to me. I say this because most of the writing is focused on the three girls with Harry really becoming vocal only during the time where he is going through a depression phase. Like if Harry was not the main link in this soul bond (even if the other three girls are bonded together) I feel like his presence in the story would not be needed.
Now with these factors this story is in no way bad, just not the type of story I'm looking for. This is definitely worth a try to see if you like this story. I just wanted to write this because I could not find a comment saying any of this.
Wow, this has got to be one of the more in depth and fleshed out fan fictions out there for HP. It certainly has many great points with the introduction of actual mental/physical issues for Harry with an actual systematic way of treatment with him not being miraculously cured in one month or something.
HOWEVER, this story overall, to me, feels really depressing. Also, while it is great that Harry is showing how he gets more power it seems like it is pointless. I am saying this because while what Harry experiences is different to novels and most fan fictions, the results are either the same or roughly the same. An example is how all the power Harry has does not do more than just make him look sexy and fight the same battles which are the same in canon and sometimes end with a worse off ending (First year troll fight).
Also Harry in some ways feels more like a side character to me. I say this because most of the writing is focused on the three girls with Harry really becoming vocal only during the time where he is going through a depression phase. Like if Harry was not the main link in this soul bond (even if the other three girls are bonded together) I feel like his presence in the story would not be needed.
Now with these factors this story is in no way bad, just not the type of story I'm looking for. This is definitely worth a try to see if you like this story. I just wanted to write this because I could not find a comment saying any of this.
1/16/2021 c52 4Darkened Void
Welp, I finished your story and so far it's been a wild ride. I love the concept and most of the characters. Neville and Daphne are particularly well done, in my opinion. I am on the fence about Sirius, but I can see the motivations behind some of what he is doing. However, he almost feels...underutilized? I'm not sure.
I can't wait to see the confrontation between Fleur and the girls. I am really excited to see where all of this goes.
I really hope that you can start updating again soon. This is one of the best soul bond fics I have ever read. Usually, I stop reading a few chapters into them because they are kind of cringy. That being said, I wish you all the best and hope your muse (and spare time) come back to you soon!
4Darkened VoidWelp, I finished your story and so far it's been a wild ride. I love the concept and most of the characters. Neville and Daphne are particularly well done, in my opinion. I am on the fence about Sirius, but I can see the motivations behind some of what he is doing. However, he almost feels...underutilized? I'm not sure.
I can't wait to see the confrontation between Fleur and the girls. I am really excited to see where all of this goes.
I really hope that you can start updating again soon. This is one of the best soul bond fics I have ever read. Usually, I stop reading a few chapters into them because they are kind of cringy. That being said, I wish you all the best and hope your muse (and spare time) come back to you soon!