for Mass Effect: Plan for the Galaxy11h c49 Aconitum613
Really love this story hope we will get a new chapter soon I wonder if the mc should look into claymore mines etc. , because it’s possible that modern alien scanner do not scan for C4 etc and the husks are sworm enemies that are a prime target for mines.
Really love this story hope we will get a new chapter soon I wonder if the mc should look into claymore mines etc. , because it’s possible that modern alien scanner do not scan for C4 etc and the husks are sworm enemies that are a prime target for mines.
22h c44 
2Walkmanapprenticewordsmith
oof, another gloss over of his visit with klara. so much emphasis on how he lost his son. but no showing of him raising another child. unfortunate
2Walkmanapprenticewordsmithoof, another gloss over of his visit with klara. so much emphasis on how he lost his son. but no showing of him raising another child. unfortunate
9/10 c27 Walkmanapprenticewordsmith
not the biggest thing, but was a lil dissapointed we didnt get a lil klara scene, considering he asked for that time. just a weird little gloss over, didnt get to even see him ask her if she wanted to be adopted or anything.
not the biggest thing, but was a lil dissapointed we didnt get a lil klara scene, considering he asked for that time. just a weird little gloss over, didnt get to even see him ask her if she wanted to be adopted or anything.
9/7 c1 Guest
I’ve tried to read this like 4 times and I still can’t get past this absolute crap chapter.
I’ve tried to read this like 4 times and I still can’t get past this absolute crap chapter.
9/9 c33 N7SPARTAN-Commander-Jay117
Fraking EPIC. Nver seen the Prthean bobble Laira was in delt with like that.
Fraking EPIC. Nver seen the Prthean bobble Laira was in delt with like that.
9/5 c49 Vindikar
Been reading through for the last 3 days or so, have enjoyed your work immensely and applaud you sticking with it for so long! So far i have enjoyed every chapter, even the background/other pov ones! Thank you for your efforts :-)
Been reading through for the last 3 days or so, have enjoyed your work immensely and applaud you sticking with it for so long! So far i have enjoyed every chapter, even the background/other pov ones! Thank you for your efforts :-)
8/31 c49 Guest
This is a very fantastic fanfic. Understandable personal issues, legitimate mistake that didn't require dumbing down the mc. A whole lot of adventures and LOOTING, finally someone is actually looting.
This is a very fantastic fanfic. Understandable personal issues, legitimate mistake that didn't require dumbing down the mc. A whole lot of adventures and LOOTING, finally someone is actually looting.
9/1 c6 Glitner
well ... this killed my mood to continue reading.. i always cross out angst genere when i search for stories ... but this just scream angst and hurt and comfort...
well ... this killed my mood to continue reading.. i always cross out angst genere when i search for stories ... but this just scream angst and hurt and comfort...
8/30 c49 Guest
Dont mind backstory. But a chapter fully focused on one feels... Wasted? As it doesnt progress main story especially if nothing big happens in background.
Feels like im excited to read a chapter to be disappointed for no major changes or even progression on main story. And unlike say GoT where it was multiple main stories, this is clear a main and background. So recommendation in future would be to trickle it in here and there where appropriate.
Dont mind backstory. But a chapter fully focused on one feels... Wasted? As it doesnt progress main story especially if nothing big happens in background.
Feels like im excited to read a chapter to be disappointed for no major changes or even progression on main story. And unlike say GoT where it was multiple main stories, this is clear a main and background. So recommendation in future would be to trickle it in here and there where appropriate.
8/30 c49 BrokenandBored
Noticed the hint about Javik, looking forward to see how that goes! TYFTC
Noticed the hint about Javik, looking forward to see how that goes! TYFTC
8/31 c49 PwnerofHeroes
i agree with the sentiment of Tali being too young to look at like that, although from memory shes 22 in me1, not a teenager
i agree with the sentiment of Tali being too young to look at like that, although from memory shes 22 in me1, not a teenager
8/31 c49 StarRacer42
Lol I liked the background stuff but don't usually comment. I love the writings. Thanks for your work.
Lol I liked the background stuff but don't usually comment. I love the writings. Thanks for your work.