for Mass Effect: Plan for the Galaxy9/22 c50 
1WeAreTheWord
Nice to see an update. Will you also be working on Wandering Huntsman? The first 2 chapters were promising and they were a fun read
1WeAreTheWordNice to see an update. Will you also be working on Wandering Huntsman? The first 2 chapters were promising and they were a fun read
9/22 c49 HelpingHand
I'm ok with, even like, other POVs and seeing what others are doing but the last chapter was just shooting slavers. That has happened a lot in the story and anything would get boring if it is repeated enough times. At least when the orphanage was attacked that changed things up to having the fighting happen on Brock's turf and had more personal stakes with his daughter being there. But the last chapter wasn’t even that difficult for them or looked like they were going up against as many numbers as they have in the past. Nothing went wrong like one mercenary dropping a grenade that the biotics had to stasis the grenade to protect the kids. It was just another Tuesday.
I wonder if things will change without Brock meaning to. Like when Saren and the Geth get onto the citadel the council can’t get to the Destiny Ascension on their own. So ShieldStar soldiers save the council. They would all own Brock a favor. Be funny if the Asari Councilor is shot in the leg and needs to be carried away. All the while saying she isn’t a Maiden that needs to be carried.
The story said the Normandy docked smoothly. At some point Brock should joke to Joker that if the military doesn’t work out then he would be great as a valet parking sky cars.
I'm ok with, even like, other POVs and seeing what others are doing but the last chapter was just shooting slavers. That has happened a lot in the story and anything would get boring if it is repeated enough times. At least when the orphanage was attacked that changed things up to having the fighting happen on Brock's turf and had more personal stakes with his daughter being there. But the last chapter wasn’t even that difficult for them or looked like they were going up against as many numbers as they have in the past. Nothing went wrong like one mercenary dropping a grenade that the biotics had to stasis the grenade to protect the kids. It was just another Tuesday.
I wonder if things will change without Brock meaning to. Like when Saren and the Geth get onto the citadel the council can’t get to the Destiny Ascension on their own. So ShieldStar soldiers save the council. They would all own Brock a favor. Be funny if the Asari Councilor is shot in the leg and needs to be carried away. All the while saying she isn’t a Maiden that needs to be carried.
The story said the Normandy docked smoothly. At some point Brock should joke to Joker that if the military doesn’t work out then he would be great as a valet parking sky cars.
9/18 c49 LydiaCrazzy
Hello!
I hope you're doing well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Mass Effect: Plan for the Galaxy," and found it incredibly inspiring. I believe it has great potential to be transformed into art, and as a professional artist, I'd love to create a comic book adaptation of it.
To clarify, this would be a commission-based project where you'd hire me to create custom artwork tailored to your story. We would start by designing the characters, and once you've approved the lineart, I'd proceed to adapt the story into a complete comic. I offer a variety of artwork services, including character designs, reference sheets, book covers, novel illustrations, and full comics, with the option for custom requests.
If you're interested in having your story illustrated, I'd be thrilled to discuss the details with you—covering the process, pricing, and any ideas you have in mind for the artwork.
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Hello!
I hope you're doing well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Mass Effect: Plan for the Galaxy," and found it incredibly inspiring. I believe it has great potential to be transformed into art, and as a professional artist, I'd love to create a comic book adaptation of it.
To clarify, this would be a commission-based project where you'd hire me to create custom artwork tailored to your story. We would start by designing the characters, and once you've approved the lineart, I'd proceed to adapt the story into a complete comic. I offer a variety of artwork services, including character designs, reference sheets, book covers, novel illustrations, and full comics, with the option for custom requests.
If you're interested in having your story illustrated, I'd be thrilled to discuss the details with you—covering the process, pricing, and any ideas you have in mind for the artwork.
Please feel free to reach out if you'd like to move forward! You can contact me at:
Discord: lydiacrazy
Instagram: lydiacrazy1
Twitter: Lidi18337530019
Email:
Looking forward to hearing from you!
9/12 c49 Aconitum613
Really love this story hope we will get a new chapter soon I wonder if the mc should look into claymore mines etc. , because it’s possible that modern alien scanner do not scan for C4 etc and the husks are sworm enemies that are a prime target for mines.
Really love this story hope we will get a new chapter soon I wonder if the mc should look into claymore mines etc. , because it’s possible that modern alien scanner do not scan for C4 etc and the husks are sworm enemies that are a prime target for mines.
9/11 c44 2Walkmanapprenticewordsmith
oof, another gloss over of his visit with klara. so much emphasis on how he lost his son. but no showing of him raising another child. unfortunate
2Walkmanapprenticewordsmithoof, another gloss over of his visit with klara. so much emphasis on how he lost his son. but no showing of him raising another child. unfortunate
9/10 c27 Walkmanapprenticewordsmith
not the biggest thing, but was a lil dissapointed we didnt get a lil klara scene, considering he asked for that time. just a weird little gloss over, didnt get to even see him ask her if she wanted to be adopted or anything.
not the biggest thing, but was a lil dissapointed we didnt get a lil klara scene, considering he asked for that time. just a weird little gloss over, didnt get to even see him ask her if she wanted to be adopted or anything.
9/7 c1 Guest
I’ve tried to read this like 4 times and I still can’t get past this absolute crap chapter.
I’ve tried to read this like 4 times and I still can’t get past this absolute crap chapter.
9/9 c33 N7SPARTAN-Commander-Jay117
Fraking EPIC. Nver seen the Prthean bobble Laira was in delt with like that.
Fraking EPIC. Nver seen the Prthean bobble Laira was in delt with like that.
9/5 c49 Vindikar
Been reading through for the last 3 days or so, have enjoyed your work immensely and applaud you sticking with it for so long! So far i have enjoyed every chapter, even the background/other pov ones! Thank you for your efforts :-)
Been reading through for the last 3 days or so, have enjoyed your work immensely and applaud you sticking with it for so long! So far i have enjoyed every chapter, even the background/other pov ones! Thank you for your efforts :-)
8/31 c49 Guest
This is a very fantastic fanfic. Understandable personal issues, legitimate mistake that didn't require dumbing down the mc. A whole lot of adventures and LOOTING, finally someone is actually looting.
This is a very fantastic fanfic. Understandable personal issues, legitimate mistake that didn't require dumbing down the mc. A whole lot of adventures and LOOTING, finally someone is actually looting.
9/1 c6 Glitner
well ... this killed my mood to continue reading.. i always cross out angst genere when i search for stories ... but this just scream angst and hurt and comfort...
well ... this killed my mood to continue reading.. i always cross out angst genere when i search for stories ... but this just scream angst and hurt and comfort...
8/30 c49 Guest
Dont mind backstory. But a chapter fully focused on one feels... Wasted? As it doesnt progress main story especially if nothing big happens in background.
Feels like im excited to read a chapter to be disappointed for no major changes or even progression on main story. And unlike say GoT where it was multiple main stories, this is clear a main and background. So recommendation in future would be to trickle it in here and there where appropriate.
Dont mind backstory. But a chapter fully focused on one feels... Wasted? As it doesnt progress main story especially if nothing big happens in background.
Feels like im excited to read a chapter to be disappointed for no major changes or even progression on main story. And unlike say GoT where it was multiple main stories, this is clear a main and background. So recommendation in future would be to trickle it in here and there where appropriate.