for Mass Effect: Plan for the Galaxy7/12/2018 c18 
2Zeru'Xil
Honestly I never did mourn the batarians fate in canon lol
This chapter kinda covers why
2Zeru'XilHonestly I never did mourn the batarians fate in canon lol
This chapter kinda covers why
7/12/2018 c6 Pteaset
Wonderfully well written a lot of stories to try to do this make the dialogue seem very cheesy are very poorly written again your writing style is so fluid that at no point in time did it seem forced you seem like a professional writer
Wonderfully well written a lot of stories to try to do this make the dialogue seem very cheesy are very poorly written again your writing style is so fluid that at no point in time did it seem forced you seem like a professional writer
7/12/2018 c5 Pteaset
I really like your characters actions too many self insert stories the characters just like you say in your comments let me just get on the ship and I’ll fix everything from there when in reality if you wanted to make a bigger impact on the future of the universe you would be doing exactly what your character is doing right now
I really like your characters actions too many self insert stories the characters just like you say in your comments let me just get on the ship and I’ll fix everything from there when in reality if you wanted to make a bigger impact on the future of the universe you would be doing exactly what your character is doing right now
7/12/2018 c3 Pteaset
Another very good chapter I like your writing style a lot of these stories on here have a very abrasive style and a lot of that simply is the fact that they’re not professional writers but your story has a very good flow to it that makes it easy to read
Another very good chapter I like your writing style a lot of these stories on here have a very abrasive style and a lot of that simply is the fact that they’re not professional writers but your story has a very good flow to it that makes it easy to read
7/12/2018 c18 Xenozip
yeah, honestly the batarian issue is just one more reason the council is incompetent, the batarians blatantly break council law and nothing happens 'because culture'.
yeah, honestly the batarian issue is just one more reason the council is incompetent, the batarians blatantly break council law and nothing happens 'because culture'.
7/12/2018 c1 Pteaset
All right I’m on board I like it the number one reason I like it is you say you’re going to change things my major problem with most self insert stories is that they don’t actually changed hands in their character is merely there in the background and might tweak things just a little bit in a way where that nothing really changes so I really hope you’re going to change things
All right I’m on board I like it the number one reason I like it is you say you’re going to change things my major problem with most self insert stories is that they don’t actually changed hands in their character is merely there in the background and might tweak things just a little bit in a way where that nothing really changes so I really hope you’re going to change things