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Idiotic fanfiction
Idiotic fanfiction
6/9/2021 c26 Ramsay
Honestly, liked the idea but not as good as I thought. The writing took an enormous leap in performance tho
Honestly, liked the idea but not as good as I thought. The writing took an enormous leap in performance tho
10/30/2020 c25 Red is sus
The Kisame twist was a bit unexpected and the scene a bit too short. The chapter was short too but hopefully next chapter you will be making it bigger. Keep it up
The Kisame twist was a bit unexpected and the scene a bit too short. The chapter was short too but hopefully next chapter you will be making it bigger. Keep it up
8/28/2020 c5 Guest
Naruto as a Rinnegan user should have all 5 elements as that is one of the many abilities of the Rinnegan, Kakashi and any Sharingan users are an exception because they can copy Jutsu.
Naruto as a Rinnegan user should have all 5 elements as that is one of the many abilities of the Rinnegan, Kakashi and any Sharingan users are an exception because they can copy Jutsu.
58/12/2020 c11 don't mind me
Hmm, this was quite light-hearted and nice, Im glad you updated a special chap like this
Hmm, this was quite light-hearted and nice, Im glad you updated a special chap like this
8/12/2020 c1 don't mind me
Hey there same guy who reviewed your chapter 1 about how you had deleted chapters. I see you have finished reposting them. Anyway the chapter was good, and I can't wait for the snake's fight with hiruzen. Update sonn! XD
Hey there same guy who reviewed your chapter 1 about how you had deleted chapters. I see you have finished reposting them. Anyway the chapter was good, and I can't wait for the snake's fight with hiruzen. Update sonn! XD
8/11/2020 c22 StrikerTheFallen
all i can say is its about dam time lol been waiting for this chapter forever! can't wait to see the next one. keep up the great work
all i can say is its about dam time lol been waiting for this chapter forever! can't wait to see the next one. keep up the great work
5/23/2020 c1 Guest
Man, I have been following this fanfic for a while and opened it today and saw the hiatus notice. Then I started going through the chapters when I realized that the entire preliminaries and meeting with Jiraiya is gone along with Gaara Naruto fight. How exactly did you fuck this story up so bad? Anyway hope 2 weeks is enough for you to fix everything. Feel very sorry for you. :)
Man, I have been following this fanfic for a while and opened it today and saw the hiatus notice. Then I started going through the chapters when I realized that the entire preliminaries and meeting with Jiraiya is gone along with Gaara Naruto fight. How exactly did you fuck this story up so bad? Anyway hope 2 weeks is enough for you to fix everything. Feel very sorry for you. :)
5/21/2020 c21 StrikerTheFallen
loved the chapter and it had its awwww moments like when the gang wanted to rush out to help Naruto. I'll have to reread the chapters but I honestly figured Naruto would have absorbed the 1 tails attacks using the preta path. then he would be able to fill his reserves instantly. and since the attacks came from the one tail, it would theoretically be the biju Chakra being absorbed. hmmm wonder if by doing that he could technically become the 10 tails container or gain abilities of the other containers. hmmmm from what I remember the 10 tails was able to resurrect fully even though it didn't have all of the biju fully absorbed. shit im putting wayyyy to much theory an thought into this lol anyway keep up the hard work!
loved the chapter and it had its awwww moments like when the gang wanted to rush out to help Naruto. I'll have to reread the chapters but I honestly figured Naruto would have absorbed the 1 tails attacks using the preta path. then he would be able to fill his reserves instantly. and since the attacks came from the one tail, it would theoretically be the biju Chakra being absorbed. hmmm wonder if by doing that he could technically become the 10 tails container or gain abilities of the other containers. hmmmm from what I remember the 10 tails was able to resurrect fully even though it didn't have all of the biju fully absorbed. shit im putting wayyyy to much theory an thought into this lol anyway keep up the hard work!
5/21/2020 c4 Lurker
I can't understand how a jounin can be so easilt defeated. It would be nice if you added mkre aspects in the plan. Like how does a kunai can easily strike an S rank ninja, I amnt saying it Isn't possible but you could improve these parts or even add a speech where Lirn goes on about how he was caught off guard.
I can't understand how a jounin can be so easilt defeated. It would be nice if you added mkre aspects in the plan. Like how does a kunai can easily strike an S rank ninja, I amnt saying it Isn't possible but you could improve these parts or even add a speech where Lirn goes on about how he was caught off guard.
5/21/2020 c17 Yo mama
Loved how you used Haku's past to make himbtryband connectvwith Gaara. Niceway of writing the fights too.
Loved how you used Haku's past to make himbtryband connectvwith Gaara. Niceway of writing the fights too.