12/8/2021 c5 8Wally991
What ruined this fic are two things.
1. It was dropped. That ruins any fic.
2. The author kept reminding us of the harem when the story didn't even get farther than Naruto being a 5 Years old.
What ruined this fic are two things.
1. It was dropped. That ruins any fic.
2. The author kept reminding us of the harem when the story didn't even get farther than Naruto being a 5 Years old.
9/17/2020 c4 SeanHicks4
Interesting take, one of the more original setups I’ve seen. I’m kinda not into mega harem fics anymore, usually I’d say it gets kinda impractical or something if everyone isn’t equal or into each other... other than that I saw a good bit of spelling and grammar issues. Looking forward to seeing some more if you can get back into it.
Interesting take, one of the more original setups I’ve seen. I’m kinda not into mega harem fics anymore, usually I’d say it gets kinda impractical or something if everyone isn’t equal or into each other... other than that I saw a good bit of spelling and grammar issues. Looking forward to seeing some more if you can get back into it.
7/7/2020 c1 2Blizzard209
jesus.. . I don't know why, maybe because I have kids, this first chapter really made me cry. like tears up bawl cry. I almost threw up when you put that rape scene. I don't know, really. I'll keep going up...but... damn... that was almost too much for me.
jesus.. . I don't know why, maybe because I have kids, this first chapter really made me cry. like tears up bawl cry. I almost threw up when you put that rape scene. I don't know, really. I'll keep going up...but... damn... that was almost too much for me.
5/23/2020 c5 Borello
damnit. the story is really good and i hoped to read more chapter.
damnit. the story is really good and i hoped to read more chapter.
4/1/2019 c4 Shodai Uzukage- Naruto Uzumaki
It might be good if she brought Naruto with. He can meet his cousin, Karin.
It might be good if she brought Naruto with. He can meet his cousin, Karin.