for Emerald Huntsman8/16/2017 c15 
11Vendicor
Oh, so good to see this again. Great chapter you made. Exited for more as always.
11VendicorOh, so good to see this again. Great chapter you made. Exited for more as always.
6/26/2017 c14 1InquisitorOfJustice
Will this lead to a redemption-arc for Jasper? That would be interesting.
1InquisitorOfJusticeWill this lead to a redemption-arc for Jasper? That would be interesting.
6/25/2017 c14 11Vendicor
This was not the turn I was expecting. A little disappointed he won't be hanging out with the gems as much now but now Interested to see more and how this plays out.
11VendicorThis was not the turn I was expecting. A little disappointed he won't be hanging out with the gems as much now but now Interested to see more and how this plays out.
6/19/2017 c12 Vendicor
Still good stuff. Real emotional character building there for everyone. Now that you mention Jasper, I definitely want to see him fight her and see how things go. Awesome work.
Still good stuff. Real emotional character building there for everyone. Now that you mention Jasper, I definitely want to see him fight her and see how things go. Awesome work.
6/17/2017 c10 Guest
Well, I quit. This story is no longer going In a direction I like, I quit.
Well, I quit. This story is no longer going In a direction I like, I quit.
6/16/2017 c11 Vendicor
Awesome. Nice to see Emmet settling in, and worried about what he thinks now that he made the Malachite connection. Great work.
Awesome. Nice to see Emmet settling in, and worried about what he thinks now that he made the Malachite connection. Great work.
6/12/2017 c10 Vendicor
This is awesome. Really excited to see more but I'm also excited for the fact you said you'll be following the shows plot as closely as possible. I do that for mine as well and I love stories that follow the shows plot. Can't wait for more and I wish you luck on future chapter developments.
This is awesome. Really excited to see more but I'm also excited for the fact you said you'll be following the shows plot as closely as possible. I do that for mine as well and I love stories that follow the shows plot. Can't wait for more and I wish you luck on future chapter developments.
6/10/2017 c9 Vj1109
This story has really hooked me. It's taken hold of me. I find myself checking FF only to see if this story has been updated. It's magnificent.
This story has really hooked me. It's taken hold of me. I find myself checking FF only to see if this story has been updated. It's magnificent.
6/6/2017 c8 Vendicor
I am happy. I an really happy right now. He finally met Steven and I could only imagine how things are going to go from here on out. Awesome job.
I am happy. I an really happy right now. He finally met Steven and I could only imagine how things are going to go from here on out. Awesome job.
6/2/2017 c5 Vendicor
Wow, nice to see I didn't have to wait long. Starting to like number 2 more and more now.
Also, really? Really? Wow that's a nice way to introduce the mystery girl into your story. Awesome. More please.
Wow, nice to see I didn't have to wait long. Starting to like number 2 more and more now.
Also, really? Really? Wow that's a nice way to introduce the mystery girl into your story. Awesome. More please.