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6/3/2017 c1 3TechnoHexx
Pretty good first chapter and a nice introduction to the Red Ranger. I would suggest using horizontal lines to split apart the opening lines and the flasback from the main story, and probably use bold or italics on any headings that indicated time or place. Also, when splitting apart dialogue like:

"Here, use this," The cloaked man said while giving him his bracelet, "put the bracelet on, and do what I do."

You have to capitalize the start of your second sentence.

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