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2/4/2018 c30 justsayin75
You, ofcourse, should write however you are comfortable and develop your story how you feel it should flow, that said... I don't agree that your exploring the characters physical relationship felt forced. I also disagree that you do not "write that stuff well." There have been a few places during the story that felt awkward but none of them have been in how E and B interact with eachother. Ive noticed it a couole of times in seens like the Bella/ Garrett chapter and the Edward/ Charlie chapter. Seems more in developing and linking in New characters. It sorta works though that maybe these normally comfortable confident characters you have written *are* more awkward in these situations. Use that, trust your writing, do or don't write the lemons but know that I (for what it's worth) don't think that the decision is make or break on your ability to write them. ;-)
2/3/2018 c30 1Lyn1991
Bella is freaking amazing because with anybody else they would have freaked out
2/2/2018 c30 glitterangel1
Tanya is so freakin annoying like can she get run over by a bus! Please update:D
2/2/2018 c30 creamoforeo
Tanya is crazy...
2/2/2018 c30 deadliestdistractionRN
oh hell...Edward got roofied...and still didn't sleep with Tanya.
2/1/2018 c29 15Cullen Cousin
Excellent chapters!
1/20/2018 c29 justsayin75
Love! Emmett and Rose so sweet! Yay for baby!
1/18/2018 c29 2Bluebelles112
wow i never though that rose would be the one pregnant... not much Esme in this though.
1/17/2018 c29 glitterangel1
Yasss! Please update I’ve been waiting for this moment when they find it wasn’t Bella who took the test! That was so freaking good:0
1/17/2018 c29 frostedglaze
That last bit was funny, though I was kind of hoping that it was Esme who popped up being pregnant.
1/17/2018 c29 8SkylerBlue
Love it!
1/17/2018 c29 6Matthias L. Stormcrow
Awesome
1/17/2018 c29 5madkins
Well that was shitty of Alice...
1/8/2018 c28 cheshire15
I liked this but I kinda wish he would call charlie out on his treatment of Bella at the cafe and taking her for granted and if he wasnt doing it, letting renee treat her like that
1/3/2018 c27 15Cullen Cousin
Excellent chapter
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