for An Essence of Silver and Steel4/29 c32 Saga686491
This is as far as I could make it. While the technical writing skill and the prompt for the story were both good almost everything else was a negative. Bad characterization, nonsensical plot held together by stupidly convenient misunderstandings and soap opera drama, terrible fight scenes, and content that doesn't match the story tags. I don't recommend this story, there are better worm fics to spend your time on.
This is as far as I could make it. While the technical writing skill and the prompt for the story were both good almost everything else was a negative. Bad characterization, nonsensical plot held together by stupidly convenient misunderstandings and soap opera drama, terrible fight scenes, and content that doesn't match the story tags. I don't recommend this story, there are better worm fics to spend your time on.
4/29 c29 Saga686491
I'm not stopping here, but this chapter and the fight was so bad I seriously considered it. Definitely gonna do some heavy skimming the next few chapters to see if the MC gets any smarter or if the plot gets any better to decide if I drop it.
I'm not stopping here, but this chapter and the fight was so bad I seriously considered it. Definitely gonna do some heavy skimming the next few chapters to see if the MC gets any smarter or if the plot gets any better to decide if I drop it.
4/8 c19 Guest
Kinda hope that taylor becomes a part of the wards or something just cus i really wanna read a fic where she is part of them i mean there prob are some where she is a part of them but i havent read any that i have liked enough to read to a point where she migth join em
Kinda hope that taylor becomes a part of the wards or something just cus i really wanna read a fic where she is part of them i mean there prob are some where she is a part of them but i havent read any that i have liked enough to read to a point where she migth join em
3/25 c43 Vinegar00
What do you mean by telling that "Taylor have no range attacks". At least she can take Proto Excalibur and unleash couple of seals...
What do you mean by telling that "Taylor have no range attacks". At least she can take Proto Excalibur and unleash couple of seals...
3/18 c97 Aren Gisly
Wait! If she gives Scion the ring with someone like Artoria or Galahad, with a strong will but not a fucking sucker like Gilgamesh, wouldn't be them the ones in control, like, being able to take the control of Scion totally?
Wait! If she gives Scion the ring with someone like Artoria or Galahad, with a strong will but not a fucking sucker like Gilgamesh, wouldn't be them the ones in control, like, being able to take the control of Scion totally?
3/18 c96 Aren Gisly
Maybe one of the chains? You know, Gleipnir was the last one, the one that worked, but the others were not weak... Although the spell in a rock is similar to the speel in a coin Taylor used before...
Maybe one of the chains? You know, Gleipnir was the last one, the one that worked, but the others were not weak... Although the spell in a rock is similar to the speel in a coin Taylor used before...
3/18 c92 Aren Gisly
So the reason of Cauldron being useless so far is because how dependent they're of Contessa... Lore accurate.
So the reason of Cauldron being useless so far is because how dependent they're of Contessa... Lore accurate.
3/18 c91 Aren Gisly
I'm just going to say 2 things, Pretty sure Alexandria has to appear and deal with this, since it's an almost direct attack on the wards, even if she resigned (and that's another fucked up situation she let happen and needs to deal with, again, why no one is using Khepri's info yet?), and in the previous one she (or any other heavy cape) didn't appear for some plot reason, but that means the PRT cannot hold another blow of this kind, not if they want to keep the PR. Now the other one, is that the Medhall also have one of those lines and no one can't stop her from doing anything through there. TFTC
I'm just going to say 2 things, Pretty sure Alexandria has to appear and deal with this, since it's an almost direct attack on the wards, even if she resigned (and that's another fucked up situation she let happen and needs to deal with, again, why no one is using Khepri's info yet?), and in the previous one she (or any other heavy cape) didn't appear for some plot reason, but that means the PRT cannot hold another blow of this kind, not if they want to keep the PR. Now the other one, is that the Medhall also have one of those lines and no one can't stop her from doing anything through there. TFTC
3/17 c89 Aren Gisly
O wonder, besides the 10 rings, did she created a more specialized healing thing? Like, she almost died several times, I would think that AlexandrÃa must realise that they need her, so her health is the most important thing to take care and an Avalon lite would be better than nothing, and already gave an order for her to forge one, just another safe...
O wonder, besides the 10 rings, did she created a more specialized healing thing? Like, she almost died several times, I would think that AlexandrÃa must realise that they need her, so her health is the most important thing to take care and an Avalon lite would be better than nothing, and already gave an order for her to forge one, just another safe...
3/17 c88 Aren Gisly
Why TF Aegis was dressed as a Military man, and what about their parents? Does all the Ward parents just decided not to be involved in their kids risky jobs?!
Why TF Aegis was dressed as a Military man, and what about their parents? Does all the Ward parents just decided not to be involved in their kids risky jobs?!
3/17 c87 Aren Gisly
I'm confused. Why Tagg didn't asked about the future that Khepri had saw, that must be in the Info as well, or AlexandrÃa, also what about Divination? I get it if she forgot between everything, but Armsmaster? Miss Militia? Dragon? Renick? Tagg? All of them? What about Dinah? She just disappeared...
I'm confused. Why Tagg didn't asked about the future that Khepri had saw, that must be in the Info as well, or AlexandrÃa, also what about Divination? I get it if she forgot between everything, but Armsmaster? Miss Militia? Dragon? Renick? Tagg? All of them? What about Dinah? She just disappeared...
3/16 c78 Aren Gisly
Why not a detective, pretty sure Holmes appeared as an heroic spirit in a youtube short, even if he's totally fantastic...
Why not a detective, pretty sure Holmes appeared as an heroic spirit in a youtube short, even if he's totally fantastic...
3/16 c77 Aren Gisly
So Rune go crazy? But that's some mental crush level... it has more sense if it's The 9...
So Rune go crazy? But that's some mental crush level... it has more sense if it's The 9...