
4/26/2024 c55
2AvidReader2425
Honestly, I just hope that she doesn’t reach for the power in time, and she has to watch her friends die, considering she was fine with everyone else who got hurt and died due to her teenage angst. She should suffer some loss of her own.

Honestly, I just hope that she doesn’t reach for the power in time, and she has to watch her friends die, considering she was fine with everyone else who got hurt and died due to her teenage angst. She should suffer some loss of her own.
4/26/2024 c54 AvidReader2425
After this Taylor should go to every person who was hurt, to the families of every person who died in this battle, and tell them to their face, but her morality, and her asinine view of good and evil was more important than the safety and lives of those in this fight.
After this Taylor should go to every person who was hurt, to the families of every person who died in this battle, and tell them to their face, but her morality, and her asinine view of good and evil was more important than the safety and lives of those in this fight.
4/26/2024 c53 AvidReader2425
Sigh, you write an excellent story, but Taylor is just so incredibly unlikable at times due to her incompetence, how she acts like some over beaten dog, terrified of doing anything, letting other people around her suffer, because she is so fundamentally broken. She’s not even willing to trust the instinct, screaming inside of her, not to trust Alexandria, because of her teenage infatuation, somehow not having gotten a reality check after two years of systematic bullying. Again, it just seems like she learns more through suffering, so maybe she has to find her father dead before she has some sudden realization that the world she lives in Isn’t a place for Saint like heroes. She just seems far too stubborn and cowardly to grow outside of immense suffering.
Sigh, you write an excellent story, but Taylor is just so incredibly unlikable at times due to her incompetence, how she acts like some over beaten dog, terrified of doing anything, letting other people around her suffer, because she is so fundamentally broken. She’s not even willing to trust the instinct, screaming inside of her, not to trust Alexandria, because of her teenage infatuation, somehow not having gotten a reality check after two years of systematic bullying. Again, it just seems like she learns more through suffering, so maybe she has to find her father dead before she has some sudden realization that the world she lives in Isn’t a place for Saint like heroes. She just seems far too stubborn and cowardly to grow outside of immense suffering.
4/26/2024 c52 AvidReader2425
Thanks for another enjoyable chapter, and the action was very well done, although for hesitancy to take a life is still going to get her in trouble
Thanks for another enjoyable chapter, and the action was very well done, although for hesitancy to take a life is still going to get her in trouble
4/26/2024 c51 AvidReader2425
Thanks for the chapter I guess, but honestly Taylor really needs some character growth and it seems like the only time we saw that was when her friends were killed in the other timeline. Does she only learn from suffering? Does she have to lose her father next, so that she can learn another lesson?
Thanks for the chapter I guess, but honestly Taylor really needs some character growth and it seems like the only time we saw that was when her friends were killed in the other timeline. Does she only learn from suffering? Does she have to lose her father next, so that she can learn another lesson?
4/26/2024 c50 AvidReader2425
Thanks for the chapter, hopefully this will be a wake up call for her and if not, then she really does deserve to lose her friends since she’s not willing to do what’s necessary to save them.
Thanks for the chapter, hopefully this will be a wake up call for her and if not, then she really does deserve to lose her friends since she’s not willing to do what’s necessary to save them.
4/26/2024 c49 AvidReader2425
Lol, Lisa was completely right, and I wonder what kind of suffering it might take for Taylor to get a dose of reality
Lol, Lisa was completely right, and I wonder what kind of suffering it might take for Taylor to get a dose of reality
4/26/2024 c47 AvidReader2425
Honestly, for the regular criminals, I don’t have an issue with her being non-lethal, just as long as she is willing to cross that line for people like slaughterhouse nine and so on, and maybe is more willing to knock out some of the more dangerous criminals more expediently lol.
Honestly, for the regular criminals, I don’t have an issue with her being non-lethal, just as long as she is willing to cross that line for people like slaughterhouse nine and so on, and maybe is more willing to knock out some of the more dangerous criminals more expediently lol.
4/26/2024 c46 AvidReader2425
Thanks for another fun and entertaining chapter, I like the communication between the three of them
Thanks for another fun and entertaining chapter, I like the communication between the three of them
4/26/2024 c45 AvidReader2425
Thanks for another excellent chapter, I especially liked the choice with Arachne, since I really didn’t expect it. Although I am a little curious on what could potentially make her want to call someone like Gilgamesh, maybe one of the end bringers would bring forth the first and greatest king.
Thanks for another excellent chapter, I especially liked the choice with Arachne, since I really didn’t expect it. Although I am a little curious on what could potentially make her want to call someone like Gilgamesh, maybe one of the end bringers would bring forth the first and greatest king.
4/26/2024 c42 AvidReader2425
Thanks for another great chapter, although she really does need to inform her father of what’s going on or else he’s going to get blindsided
Thanks for another great chapter, although she really does need to inform her father of what’s going on or else he’s going to get blindsided
4/26/2024 c41 AvidReader2425
Thanks for another excellent chapter, and I’m glad that the slide misunderstanding between Taylor and Amy wasn’t drawn out by her suddenly walking away to carry that a misunderstanding on.
Thanks for another excellent chapter, and I’m glad that the slide misunderstanding between Taylor and Amy wasn’t drawn out by her suddenly walking away to carry that a misunderstanding on.