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6/8/2017 c4 21evolvelove
haha cute, nurse janna would look very good to me...
keep writing and evolve more!
6/7/2017 c3 evolvelove
well this one was... hot? i dunno
it was good by the way a little forced but good
keep writing and evolve more!
6/6/2017 c2 Guest
Another good one. I was a little nervous toward the end, but all's well that ends well. And I wonder... Just how aware of of herself was Janna at the end? Hehe...
I can't wait for the next chapter.
6/5/2017 c1 Guest
An excellent "first" chapter. Keep up the good work.
6/5/2017 c1 Solastii
Akskdhejfjodd definitely not what I expected but it was way better than I expected XD it's so cuuuuuuuute
6/6/2017 c2 31Axis29
Sorry, that last review was supposed to be for chapter 2 but the mobile app makes reviewing confusing.
6/6/2017 c1 Axis29
Once again, great work. I wonder if Star will leave the two alone ever again.
6/6/2017 c2 21evolvelove
lol i thought they were goint to fuck like rabbits :v
good one, may be short but good
keep writing and evolve love!
6/5/2017 c1 evolvelove
Hahaha It was funny i like It!
6/5/2017 c1 31Axis29
Woah, I will admit, at first I thought it would be their first ... you know, but then as I read it became so much better. I think you have managed to capture the essence of Manna week and Can't wait to see what you'll write for the other days.
6/5/2017 c1 4V0ID115
Interesting story. Short, but sweet and enjoyable. Looking forward for the rest of Manna week )
6/5/2017 c1 28Or-lan-do626
She got what she wanted and she the first Ms.D .
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