for The Preparation10/27/2020 c1 Shawna
Great one-shot about Evie giving Mal a make-over. And I loved how Mal hated every minute of it! I loved how, during the "torturous make-over" Mal was imagining how life would be back on the Isle and how it was back when they lived there. I loved how you showed how much Mal hated being in Aurodon instead of "telling" us she hated living in Aurodon. That's good story-telling! Keep up the good work!
Great one-shot about Evie giving Mal a make-over. And I loved how Mal hated every minute of it! I loved how, during the "torturous make-over" Mal was imagining how life would be back on the Isle and how it was back when they lived there. I loved how you showed how much Mal hated being in Aurodon instead of "telling" us she hated living in Aurodon. That's good story-telling! Keep up the good work!
7/2/2017 c1 
10DarkNight18
Brutal, but Mal truly does deserve her happily ever after, and Ben's the one to give it to her, :D
10DarkNight18Brutal, but Mal truly does deserve her happily ever after, and Ben's the one to give it to her, :D
6/6/2017 c1 Guest
awesome job
awesome job