for The Dog7/1/2020 c2 Guest
Please continue! I love this!
Please continue! I love this!
3/29/2019 c2 Guest
love it
love it
9/21/2018 c2 Guest
Hey, you never finished the story...and I was really enjoying it. Can you please please write the next chapter...
Hey, you never finished the story...and I was really enjoying it. Can you please please write the next chapter...
8/7/2017 c2 
10DarkNight18
I LOVE ️ IT! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! Dude was adorable, Carlos deserves SO MUCH HAPPINESS, and Ben's inner thought on the whole situation, not to mention his reaction to Carlos trying to save him, was absolutely perfect!
10DarkNight18I LOVE ️ IT! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! Dude was adorable, Carlos deserves SO MUCH HAPPINESS, and Ben's inner thought on the whole situation, not to mention his reaction to Carlos trying to save him, was absolutely perfect!
8/7/2017 c2 Carmine De Vil
I'm loving it! Can't wait for more!
I'm loving it! Can't wait for more!
7/14/2017 c1 Guest
Please update soon
Please update soon
7/2/2017 c1 10DarkNight18
Let the rub off, it makes for a good story, ;D
And Carlos really needs some love, 3
10DarkNight18Let the rub off, it makes for a good story, ;D
And Carlos really needs some love, 3
6/10/2017 c1 2Light's Lady
Great start to this story, just the right amount of serious internal struggle and adorable humor. Once again it was very well written.
I would be interested in seeing your thoughts on what is going through Carlos's head while Dude is chasing him. But this is your story so write what you feel should be written.
Let your muses lead you where they may and always keep writing!
~Light's Lady
2Light's LadyGreat start to this story, just the right amount of serious internal struggle and adorable humor. Once again it was very well written.
I would be interested in seeing your thoughts on what is going through Carlos's head while Dude is chasing him. But this is your story so write what you feel should be written.
Let your muses lead you where they may and always keep writing!
~Light's Lady
6/8/2017 c1 Carmine De Vil
Oh wow. I can't wait.
Oh wow. I can't wait.