for Giovanni's Laser Thingy2/11/2013 c1 Person
You know, you can put it in separate chapters.
You know, you can put it in separate chapters.
4/28/2009 c1 Dill
It's not very good, really.
It's not very good, really.
10/10/2008 c1 
4DarkRocketX
Hilarious. Love it. Heehehehehe. It is pretty evil eith good humour. Please continue.
4DarkRocketXHilarious. Love it. Heehehehehe. It is pretty evil eith good humour. Please continue.
4/21/2001 c1 5Hikaru and Umi
Um...ok...that was...intersesting. But since you kind of reviewed on my fic I decided to do the same to yours. One question though...HOW CAN YOU NOT LIKE FLAMES THERE REALLY FUNNY! That's all. Of course this isn't a flame because that would be weird and blah blah blah blah blah. But I thought some of that was REALLY funny. Now you can listen to me go on forever. Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah...blah blah blah! ect. ect ect...
5Hikaru and UmiUm...ok...that was...intersesting. But since you kind of reviewed on my fic I decided to do the same to yours. One question though...HOW CAN YOU NOT LIKE FLAMES THERE REALLY FUNNY! That's all. Of course this isn't a flame because that would be weird and blah blah blah blah blah. But I thought some of that was REALLY funny. Now you can listen to me go on forever. Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah...blah blah blah! ect. ect ect...
4/3/2001 c1 Alex Warlorn
I'll never understand why people find stupid fics, funny, there's no point to them, and therfore, are boring.
I'll never understand why people find stupid fics, funny, there's no point to them, and therfore, are boring.
3/30/2001 c1 2Crystal Aerodactyl
Well, I have to admit that was stupid. But you warned me didn't you? Okay I give this story a 6 out of 10. Its not that bad.
2Crystal AerodactylWell, I have to admit that was stupid. But you warned me didn't you? Okay I give this story a 6 out of 10. Its not that bad.
3/17/2001 c1 3Korinna Calypso
That was funny! It makes me want to write my pokemon fic even more (I'm stuck writing HP fics and songfics). But that was good. You should write a fic that's like "Celebrity Death Match" but with Pokemon. (Get rid of Ash first, k?)
3Korinna CalypsoThat was funny! It makes me want to write my pokemon fic even more (I'm stuck writing HP fics and songfics). But that was good. You should write a fic that's like "Celebrity Death Match" but with Pokemon. (Get rid of Ash first, k?)
3/11/2001 c1 Skippy the Bush Kangaroo
interesting, and not really good, even though I know it is supposed to be stupid. I kind of though funny would be in there somewhere also. Hmm, guess not!
interesting, and not really good, even though I know it is supposed to be stupid. I kind of though funny would be in there somewhere also. Hmm, guess not!
1/16/2001 c1 Garrick C
I like when Gary Oak became a fried egg if Ash buoght him to Prof. Oak. Even though I think that you should put Piedmon and Puppetmon should be battling to the death in a Roman Collusium! And I wonder why you can kill Misty by a steamroller because she even deserve to die.
I like when Gary Oak became a fried egg if Ash buoght him to Prof. Oak. Even though I think that you should put Piedmon and Puppetmon should be battling to the death in a Roman Collusium! And I wonder why you can kill Misty by a steamroller because she even deserve to die.
1/14/2001 c1 4pika pal251
Im the one who you said what is this to my first fan fic called Sentaret = pain It is pointless and I am insane
good night everybody
4pika pal251Im the one who you said what is this to my first fan fic called Sentaret = pain It is pointless and I am insane
good night everybody