for Emergence of the Dragon12/24/2018 c3 
1Amoymon
Meh very anti-climatic with the previous one before. I see a common creator's pet trope here.
1AmoymonMeh very anti-climatic with the previous one before. I see a common creator's pet trope here.
12/24/2018 c3 Sjadim
Wow... I just discovered this story and I love it! Really eloquently written and a great conclusion.
Wow... I just discovered this story and I love it! Really eloquently written and a great conclusion.
12/24/2018 c3 2Andromeda Jackson
Only one word: Magnificent.
I have like the detail added by the final article From Bastard to...
2Andromeda JacksonOnly one word: Magnificent.
I have like the detail added by the final article From Bastard to...
12/24/2018 c3 2Van der Ay
What a great ending to your story, thank you. Merry Christmas to you and a happy new year.
2Van der AyWhat a great ending to your story, thank you. Merry Christmas to you and a happy new year.
12/24/2018 c2 The Dark Revan
I just wanted to also say that this story and the chapter three one are amazing!
I just wanted to also say that this story and the chapter three one are amazing!
12/24/2018 c3 The Dark Revan
I would have loved to read the reaction that Westeros and her grandchildren would have had to her death, and how her funeral would have been and what could have happened in it.
I would have loved to read the reaction that Westeros and her grandchildren would have had to her death, and how her funeral would have been and what could have happened in it.
10/6/2018 c2 Guest
Great chapter. Didn't actually think you would come back to this story. Now I am looking forward to the next one. I am wondering about the title, "The Queen" or "The Mother" perhaps. I feel through that the entire Other and Wights situation was glossed over and should have played a bigger role, through you might come back to it next chapter. Until next time.
Great chapter. Didn't actually think you would come back to this story. Now I am looking forward to the next one. I am wondering about the title, "The Queen" or "The Mother" perhaps. I feel through that the entire Other and Wights situation was glossed over and should have played a bigger role, through you might come back to it next chapter. Until next time.
6/20/2018 c2 Shiva
Please update this please please please!
Please update this please please please!
6/19/2018 c1 OpehliaOfAshaii
Well. That was disgusting. I think the fact that she not only forgave them so fast was unbelievable, but also the fact that she started fucking ALL of them. And then marries them. There wasn't even any buildup to any of them becoming lovers. The little name stealer just takes off her clothes and suddenly "Joan" (what an ugly name) is instantly attracted to her. It's so weird and damn gross. And in the end everything is finished all nice and tidy like weak ass rhaegar didn't neglect her for YEARS and bitter Elia didn't treat her like less than nothing. The entire family shit on her and I agree with what another reviewer said. She will always be looked at as a second class citizen by her family. Another thing that bothered me was the fact that she didn't get a dragon. Was the point of that to emphasize the fact that she was only half targaryen? Because I mean Aegon, Rhaenys And Visenyatwo are ALL half targs. They're not full blooded incest born targaryens so they're on the same level as Joan. I would've liked the story better if she rebelled against her father, or if she killed her siblings dragons or stole one. I was so mad that Visenyatwo's dragon tried to intimidate Joan and she stood there and did nothing. I wish Joan would've shot an arrow at the little shit. The dragons honestly seemed wasted and irrelevant to the plot if Joan didn't hatch one.
Well. That was disgusting. I think the fact that she not only forgave them so fast was unbelievable, but also the fact that she started fucking ALL of them. And then marries them. There wasn't even any buildup to any of them becoming lovers. The little name stealer just takes off her clothes and suddenly "Joan" (what an ugly name) is instantly attracted to her. It's so weird and damn gross. And in the end everything is finished all nice and tidy like weak ass rhaegar didn't neglect her for YEARS and bitter Elia didn't treat her like less than nothing. The entire family shit on her and I agree with what another reviewer said. She will always be looked at as a second class citizen by her family. Another thing that bothered me was the fact that she didn't get a dragon. Was the point of that to emphasize the fact that she was only half targaryen? Because I mean Aegon, Rhaenys And Visenyatwo are ALL half targs. They're not full blooded incest born targaryens so they're on the same level as Joan. I would've liked the story better if she rebelled against her father, or if she killed her siblings dragons or stole one. I was so mad that Visenyatwo's dragon tried to intimidate Joan and she stood there and did nothing. I wish Joan would've shot an arrow at the little shit. The dragons honestly seemed wasted and irrelevant to the plot if Joan didn't hatch one.
5/31/2018 c2 andjelija.nenic
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
5/15/2018 c1 May the Tomato be with you
holding grudges for awhile...
... alright
holding them for -what?- 20 years?
seriously?
=/
holding grudges for awhile...
... alright
holding them for -what?- 20 years?
seriously?
=/