for Emergence of the Dragon6/12/2017 c1 Legion40k
It was a nice story by the ending ruined it for me. Why would Joan forgive her siblings after everything they've done when she was clearly still resentful of them and the rest of the family. And why would she accept sleeping with them. If you ask me she should've just fucked off to Winterfell there she has a family that loves and appreciates her for who she is.
It was a nice story by the ending ruined it for me. Why would Joan forgive her siblings after everything they've done when she was clearly still resentful of them and the rest of the family. And why would she accept sleeping with them. If you ask me she should've just fucked off to Winterfell there she has a family that loves and appreciates her for who she is.
6/12/2017 c1 lala
Please don't tell me joan we end up this her siblings...
We her ''education'' and past I can't visualise it ...
Please don't tell me joan we end up this her siblings...
We her ''education'' and past I can't visualise it ...
6/12/2017 c1 Guest
This is an interesting story, but I do wish you held Rhaegar more to blame instead of seemingly shifting most of the blame on Elia.
This is an interesting story, but I do wish you held Rhaegar more to blame instead of seemingly shifting most of the blame on Elia.
6/11/2017 c1 Guest
Great story
Great story
6/12/2017 c1 Arianna Le Fay
Honestly this is stupid i mean after all the pain just to sleep with her siblings just like that abd joan wasnt a true dragon i am frankly totally dissapointed i know it was an au one shot but it is full of stupidity especially with joan taking after the wolves she wouldnt have tried to make amends or have sec with those 3
Honestly this is stupid i mean after all the pain just to sleep with her siblings just like that abd joan wasnt a true dragon i am frankly totally dissapointed i know it was an au one shot but it is full of stupidity especially with joan taking after the wolves she wouldnt have tried to make amends or have sec with those 3
6/12/2017 c1 SarcasmBrightensUpMyDay
It was a great story plot! But the ending made no sense. Joan who resented rhaegar, Elia, wasn't comfortable with rhaella,and even her siblings. She knew what theydid to her/felt for her before i.e. get her punished for their wrongdoings. It seemed that she forgave them waaaaaaayyy too easily.
Personally, I think she should have given an "up yours" to the "three heads" and returned to winterfell, where she felt comfortable and cherished like a sister (not a sister in the targaryen manner). Some pretty words would not have swayed her. Also, a four-way f.u.c.k. after everything made her seem like she was easy.
Just my thoughts. Loved the plot and writing, just was a little irritated at the ending (I hope Jon doesn't give in at all to the targs in ADAWAS ) can't wait to read more of your stories :)
Pls don't take this as a flame/criticism. Just my honest thoughts.
It was a great story plot! But the ending made no sense. Joan who resented rhaegar, Elia, wasn't comfortable with rhaella,and even her siblings. She knew what theydid to her/felt for her before i.e. get her punished for their wrongdoings. It seemed that she forgave them waaaaaaayyy too easily.
Personally, I think she should have given an "up yours" to the "three heads" and returned to winterfell, where she felt comfortable and cherished like a sister (not a sister in the targaryen manner). Some pretty words would not have swayed her. Also, a four-way f.u.c.k. after everything made her seem like she was easy.
Just my thoughts. Loved the plot and writing, just was a little irritated at the ending (I hope Jon doesn't give in at all to the targs in ADAWAS ) can't wait to read more of your stories :)
Pls don't take this as a flame/criticism. Just my honest thoughts.
6/12/2017 c1 LuxEterna1
not bad though i wonder why joan would consider loving her siblings like she did afterall she grew up mostly around people who thought incest an abomination which should have coloured her perception unless aerys had such a big influence on her sensibilities but then thats highly unlikely
ps maybe next time try a story where you redeem robert, so far he always ended up looking bad in your stories (eg make him the snape to jons hp? aka hating the father but still protecting the child for the mothers sake?)
not bad though i wonder why joan would consider loving her siblings like she did afterall she grew up mostly around people who thought incest an abomination which should have coloured her perception unless aerys had such a big influence on her sensibilities but then thats highly unlikely
ps maybe next time try a story where you redeem robert, so far he always ended up looking bad in your stories (eg make him the snape to jons hp? aka hating the father but still protecting the child for the mothers sake?)
6/12/2017 c1 
91TMI Fairy
I liked the story as it was refreshingly new for me.
But then the Mary Sue grew stronger and stronger.
The antic of Joan in KL and then duel with Robert brought me to the brink and then the four-way f-u-c-k with her siblings pushed me over it.
I stopped reading at that point - not because of the f-u-c-k itself, but because I thought it lame. I won't reader any further chapters either.
Nevertheless thank you for the first half or so of this fic.
Borys
91TMI FairyI liked the story as it was refreshingly new for me.
But then the Mary Sue grew stronger and stronger.
The antic of Joan in KL and then duel with Robert brought me to the brink and then the four-way f-u-c-k with her siblings pushed me over it.
I stopped reading at that point - not because of the f-u-c-k itself, but because I thought it lame. I won't reader any further chapters either.
Nevertheless thank you for the first half or so of this fic.
Borys
6/12/2017 c1 judotroy
Grear story, not a fan of the ending though. Would've liked it better if she said 'fuck you' and left.
Grear story, not a fan of the ending though. Would've liked it better if she said 'fuck you' and left.
6/11/2017 c1 Hexylen
Great work, will this be a full story, or a oneshot like The Fox and The Dragon?
Great work, will this be a full story, or a oneshot like The Fox and The Dragon?