for Miss your Smile1/18 c1 Guest
What a crappy story and beckett is such a selfish bitch since when their story had stalled. Just because castle liked to play video game and one moment of lapse does not mean he had taken her for granted, they had their trip in snow last month where he had his knees blow and even after that Vaughn case castle stood by her on the bomb and willing to die for her and leaving alexis an orphan he was ready to be her even if killed him, so again what does that self centred bitch wants, I think she want's what she always wants her career and her dead mother case no matter the consequences. Castle always put her first when it comes to their relationship and partnership but he was never her first choice. Castle lost him self and his identity to them and their relationship always putting her needs above his but she never did that hell she doesn't even know why Castle's marriages had failed and she never initiate something that will reveal Castle's onion. So I guess castle should spare himself all the heartache and move onn
What a crappy story and beckett is such a selfish bitch since when their story had stalled. Just because castle liked to play video game and one moment of lapse does not mean he had taken her for granted, they had their trip in snow last month where he had his knees blow and even after that Vaughn case castle stood by her on the bomb and willing to die for her and leaving alexis an orphan he was ready to be her even if killed him, so again what does that self centred bitch wants, I think she want's what she always wants her career and her dead mother case no matter the consequences. Castle always put her first when it comes to their relationship and partnership but he was never her first choice. Castle lost him self and his identity to them and their relationship always putting her needs above his but she never did that hell she doesn't even know why Castle's marriages had failed and she never initiate something that will reveal Castle's onion. So I guess castle should spare himself all the heartache and move onn
11/2/2017 c1 malleys8
You kept my attention from beginning to end. You not only have a fantastic way with words, you structure your conversations in a manner where this reader needs to continue on to hear what will be coming in the future portions of their conversations. This, of course, means staying until the entire communication is completed. Which, with your stories so far, means staying to the end.
You kept my attention from beginning to end. You not only have a fantastic way with words, you structure your conversations in a manner where this reader needs to continue on to hear what will be coming in the future portions of their conversations. This, of course, means staying until the entire communication is completed. Which, with your stories so far, means staying to the end.
8/13/2017 c1 
14Perspex13
What a novelty - a health conversation about commitment and looking toward the future! This was a great concept, even if the conversation got a bit awkward. But they were honest and worked to make things happen, and look at the reward!
14Perspex13What a novelty - a health conversation about commitment and looking toward the future! This was a great concept, even if the conversation got a bit awkward. But they were honest and worked to make things happen, and look at the reward!
6/14/2017 c1 2mobazan27
I have always loved that song, even though it's almost as old as I am.
This story was great, a welcomed change... it almost made me forget how inane, stupid, incongruent that whole story arc was...
2mobazan27I have always loved that song, even though it's almost as old as I am.
This story was great, a welcomed change... it almost made me forget how inane, stupid, incongruent that whole story arc was...
6/13/2017 c1 Guest
Sweet story
This so would have worked on the show
Sweet story
Thank you
Sweet story
This so would have worked on the show
Sweet story
Thank you
6/13/2017 c1 Guest
Cute little story, and I learned a new word - removalist. :)
You have a couple of really minor 'mistakes' - you mentioned that Kate didn't want to call Castle because it was late, and mentioned the local time was 11 p.m. as if DC and NYC are in different time zones; they're not. Also, love the England Dan and John Ford Coley reference, but you actually have one of the lines wrong. It actually is, "But there's a warm wind blowin', the stars are out." I used to swear it was "blowin' the stars around" too, but the singers say it's "stars are out." Just FYI.
Cute little story, and I learned a new word - removalist. :)
You have a couple of really minor 'mistakes' - you mentioned that Kate didn't want to call Castle because it was late, and mentioned the local time was 11 p.m. as if DC and NYC are in different time zones; they're not. Also, love the England Dan and John Ford Coley reference, but you actually have one of the lines wrong. It actually is, "But there's a warm wind blowin', the stars are out." I used to swear it was "blowin' the stars around" too, but the singers say it's "stars are out." Just FYI.
6/13/2017 c1 sasans
Very nice story. They had some communication issues to start with and each one was afraid of what the other really wanted. I'm glad the old adage of 'absence makes the heart grow fonder' on in this case they figure they can't and don't want to live without the other finally makes them agree to do something about it. Thank you for your story and fine ending.
Very nice story. They had some communication issues to start with and each one was afraid of what the other really wanted. I'm glad the old adage of 'absence makes the heart grow fonder' on in this case they figure they can't and don't want to live without the other finally makes them agree to do something about it. Thank you for your story and fine ending.
6/13/2017 c1 castle2824
I thought that was the song you were referring to at the beginning. Love that song. Great story.
I thought that was the song you were referring to at the beginning. Love that song. Great story.
6/13/2017 c1 ElValTal
A sweet story! A little angsty, but to be expected during that time in the Caskett relationship. Nicely done! :)
A sweet story! A little angsty, but to be expected during that time in the Caskett relationship. Nicely done! :)
6/13/2017 c1 DX2012
Better than what went on in the show. Beckett was a b***h in this episode. Glad to see you chose for her to tell him first.
Better than what went on in the show. Beckett was a b***h in this episode. Glad to see you chose for her to tell him first.