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6/21/2017 c1 23Nova the hedgehog
This is REALLY good for a one-shot. Like, REAAAALLY. And it's all good, we both can feel the feelings of feels.. Because songs can do that to people. X')

I like how you shown Amy in here. You can feel what she's dealing with. I hope you will feel better, and I know you will. I bid good luck to you and your stories! :)
6/16/2017 c1 2SuperIndigo
Very touching. I like the short note Sonic left at the conclusion. The story would be even better with less telling and more showing of Amy's emotions through her actions. (Also, try to avoid the cliché single tear on the cheek, that takes away from the realism of crying.) The read is kinda choppy with the brief sentence structures, maybe shake it up a bit in that regard. But the story is nice. I hope you'll feel better soon and keep on writing.
6/15/2017 c1 Guest
My...fucking...heart. How dare you make such a great yet sad one shot.
6/14/2017 c1 Lilac Rabbit
Wow this is Amazing! And I hope you feel better and update more chapters
6/14/2017 c1 2Purrincesseawah
I'm sorry but OMG WHAT THE HELL! why in the world Fiona? I thought you liked Sonamy. this has nothing to do with it since she's still heartbroken and he's "happy" with her.

But overall good job on the writing. I know that you wanted to start something new, but make it a bit more... I don't know enthusiastic? anywho see u later. BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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